Challenge
Poetry: Describe a Suffocating Love
Describe a love that is either good or bad, but make it well known that one of the two or both of the parties feel suffocating at some point, whether to each other or to the reader to the point of annoyance. Bonus points if you can make them a couple that stays together regardless, it just ups the ante.
Temptress of the Night
And this temptress
of the night –
oh, how she soars in!
An incubus to
this wretched man’s soul.
Hovering,
she breathes,
and his dull breath
comes to life.
Caressing his flesh,
she moans.
And in his hollow ache,
he permits.
A siren to beauty –
she’s arrived as sin.
A pleasure to behold
but a curse she will lay upon you.
And in his prime,
this man wails –
but too late it is.
For the spirit of this man
now lays suffocated between the ribbed cage
of that sultry temptress.
Forever now to be hers.
Never to escape.
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