Challenge
Poetry: Describe a Suffocating Love
Describe a love that is either good or bad, but make it well known that one of the two or both of the parties feel suffocating at some point, whether to each other or to the reader to the point of annoyance. Bonus points if you can make them a couple that stays together regardless, it just ups the ante.
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The Complexity of Toxicity
I can't breathe
because I love her
but she's a gold-digger
And now I don't have money for my inhaler
We're just friends but she's been mooching
Now I'm gonna confront her and stop smooching
her bum
But not before I get an inhaler.
Then I'll be the suffocator
Causing asphyxiation with words.
We'll make an agreement as usual
But this time I'll hold her neck to it.