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Vicarious Voyeur
Do you often envision your life through another set of eyes? We've all caught ourselves watching someone from a distance, even admiring them, but how far would you take it? This is your chance to become a peeping tom, a stalker from afar, a follower lurking in the shadows, or a secret admirer who envies someone’s life so much, that you’d do unpredictable things to keep watching. Perhaps you’ll write it in a journal, or a letter, or just share your observations with us of what about them that gets you up in the morning. I’m interested in seeing your inner creepy come out and will reward the more disturbed higher, but keep it fictional and safe. All styles are welcome. The winner is decided by me. Remember to tag me, @ChrisSadhill, in the comments and I will read and comment on every piece. Happy writing.

Fling Thing

I have never been nor will I ever be a stalker but I have craved a partner that sent vibes through me in just the sound of her voice. Did I sync with the rhythm of words as they flowed out her lips, or did I float with the meaning of what she tried to say? Guess what? Neither. You see, I noticed a body rhythm that talked for her as she expressed how she enjoyed her day with me. I focused on this strong vibe of hers that was searching for my satisfaction in our experience. I was floored but she couldn't tell it. I could've stepped into her skin, like I step into a jacuzzi seeking the warmth in my bones. When she kissed me and walked away, I felt lost like someone blew out my candle. I wasn't going to be satisfied until I saw her shut the door of her car and drive away. But because she pulls energy from a far, she was stopped by a guy before she entered her car. I stood there and stared at her to see if she was giving him the same body rhythm she gave to me. I shared moments with her that could go down in history books. I made love to her with my eyes, I didn't just look. So it was important for me to see if what we shared was her introduction to everyone. They talked, I stared. They talked longer, I stared. Then she kissed him on the cheek and got into her car and drove off. My conclusion is phenomenal, the body rhythm she gave me was all mine.

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