Challenge
Write a free verse poem: When you said ...
Write a 12 to 21 line free verse poem about something a parent, sibling, or significant other said to you that was surprising to you. Begin the poem with the line, "When you said ...." Remember, free verse poetry doesn't follow strict patterns or conventions such as meter or rhyme scheme.
The Remark at Dinner
When you said,
"I wonder what the poor people are eating,"
I smirked.
When I looked
at the bland mashed potatoes and meatloaf,
I wondered:
Were Dad's words
deluded, a lie, or kudos to the chef, Mom?
When I grew up,
I saw Dad's words for what they were:
A declaration that perhaps
he has climbed into the middle class
through sweat and love
for his wife, his family, and grocery bargains
like meatloaf and spuds.
When you said
those words, I didn't realize we were barely scraping by.
I didn't know
that your hard work would end your life
at sixty-five.
I wish I could again hear you say,
"I wonder what the poor people are eating."
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