Challenge
Write a free verse poem: When you said ...
Write a 12 to 21 line free verse poem about something a parent, sibling, or significant other said to you that was surprising to you. Begin the poem with the line, "When you said ...." Remember, free verse poetry doesn't follow strict patterns or conventions such as meter or rhyme scheme.
Childhood Memories
when you said all men are bad
did you think that, maybe
you always picked bad men
scumbags, losers, creeps
guys you thought you could change
with your unrealized superpowers
but when you met that smart guy
who liked movies, who talked about them
who didn't need any changing
you didn't like him at all
and when you said a man's thing looks terrible
did you think that, maybe
you didn't need to say that to me
and when i was 15 and dropped out
and you said you wished i'd just
find a girl and settle down
did you think that, maybe...
oh mom, when you said these things
to me, your son
when i was just a kid
what the fuck were you thinking
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