Challenge
Write a free verse poem: When you said ...
Write a 12 to 21 line free verse poem about something a parent, sibling, or significant other said to you that was surprising to you. Begin the poem with the line, "When you said ...." Remember, free verse poetry doesn't follow strict patterns or conventions such as meter or rhyme scheme.
Fated Existences
When you said
I had looked at you
With an intensity borne of yesteryear -
And with the utmost sincerity
Had asked such a thing,
I was left to wonder in the extreme.
Why would I – your adolescent child of five –
Look at you, the one who is my mother,
My elder, she who gave me breath,
And pointedly ask the question:
“Remember when you were the child
And I was the mother?”
Insanely nonsensical, was it not?
Still, I am left with the mysterious intrigue
Of other realms of possible existence,
Parallel planes of distant realities,
And forgotten or repeated lifetimes
Intermingled amongst us,
Much like floating butterflies,
Leading us along a path
Of inevitable fate and destiny.
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