Challenge
Write a piece about an insecurity, and then comment a critique on someone else's piece, try and be constructive, I will write first so everyone has a chance to comment on one, and I will try to comment on everyone's.
Used
There was never
The need
Nor the desire
For her mind,
Her words,
Or her existence
Until their
Greed
Overcame
Their
Self-control.
Then they needed her.
They were desperate for her.
They were desperate for her
Body and
Nothing
More.
He was different.
He wanted it all:
Her mind
Her words
Her body.
He couldn't survive
Without
Her existence.
But
For too long
She had been
Worthless,
An object,
A second-hand person,
And though
He held
Her and
Told her
That she was
His world,
She was always
Terrified
That one day
He would
Act just
Like the others
Proving
That she really was
Worthless,
Pointless,
An object.
She was afraid
That her entire
Existence would
consist of being
Used.
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