Challenge
Write a pastoral about the body. A pastoral poem describes and loves a landscape. Use the first or second person narrative.*
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Sanded Beach of Lover Found
As I stroll down the sanded beach gently caressing my roughened skin.
Washed among the grains are stones a-strange no different than pimples, imperfects and other details.
Treasure and drift wood sprinkled around are carved as the marks of a creative mind.
Beauty beach a common strand incredibly human or plain raw land.
Seashells scattered delicate Sea flowers represent the feminine of a pastoral ground.
So as I stroll down a sanded environ memories reflect my lover found.
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