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I am an aspiring young director from Corona California. I am trying to achieve early success by writing a book and my YouTube channel
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In celebration of the March 28 release of my latest book, FROM ICE TO ASHES (about the birth of a rebellion on Saturn's moon Titan), I'm putting this challenge forth. Tell a story of a rebellion against Earth by an offworld colony. The person whose story moves me most gets digital copies of every scifi book I've ever published. I'll also do a thorough critique of a short story for the winner. Two runners-up get digital copies of FROM ICE TO ASHES. Visit www.rhettbruno.com for more info.
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Pitch black

It was pitch black. I could not see, but I could hear, I could feel, and I felt terrified. I was being held by a very discomforting clay sensation. So much was on my mind, where am I?! How am I here!? What's going on!? I began to weep for I did not know what else to do. But thenI heard something, something that sounded like a mixture between a hawk and cat. The sound of it made my ears hurt beyond belief! And then, it stopped. As thankful as I was for this, I knew that this might be an opportunity to find a means of escape. I tried to claw my way out of the clay like strapping, but my fingernails were no where near sharp enough to break through. I had to think, think real hard and real fast, how can I get out of this thing!! Then I remembered, I always have my army knife in my front left pocket! I quickly slithered my hand into my pocket to pull out the blade. When I finally got my knife, I immediately started to cut my way loose. I created a big enough hole to have my arms freely extended. Once I cut around my face, I was able to break free and FINALLY see... What I saw baffled me. Abstract and otherworldly technology. I wish I could fully describe what I saw, the only reference I can make is that everything was of the color white. Even the room itself was of a heaven like white. I broke through the rest of the clay substance and I fell into my knees on the ground and when I did, the floor moved like waves on the ocean. As shocked as I was, I had no time to just sit and stare. I quickly got up on my feet and ran to the closest thing that resembled a door. To my amazement, it had a regular doorknob! I opened it and saw a long, white hallway. I carefully jogged to so that if I were to hear anything, I would be able to find a place to hide. At the end of the hallway, I took a left, and then another left, followed by a right turn in which I saw the back of two incredibly large and hanous looking creatures. I waited for them to turn at the end of the hall. Once they were out of sight, I began to slowly walk forward. As I got closer, I noticed another door with a strange writing inscribed on top of it. Could this be an exit? Before I could finish deciphering, a loud alarm sprang through the hallways! I knew it was for me and I knew that I couldn't wait to find out what that door led to, so I ran as fast as I could! Many thoughts and especially questions crossed my mind, is the government doing this to me?! Did a terrorist group kidnap me!? I finally made it to the door and opened it as fast as I could! However, there was no more white, only red pierced my eyes. I saw only landscapes of red dirt and a pond of purple like substance. I was shocked. As I looked around, something clicked in my head to look up. What I saw brought tears to my eyes. An earth split into two...

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In celebration of the March 28 release of my latest book, FROM ICE TO ASHES (about the birth of a rebellion on Saturn's moon Titan), I'm putting this challenge forth. Tell a story of a rebellion against Earth by an offworld colony. The person whose story moves me most gets digital copies of every scifi book I've ever published. I'll also do a thorough critique of a short story for the winner. Two runners-up get digital copies of FROM ICE TO ASHES. Visit www.rhettbruno.com for more info.
Written by Acadec56 in portal Sci-Fi
Pitch black
It was pitch black. I could not see, but I could hear, I could feel, and I felt terrified. I was being held by a very discomforting clay sensation. So much was on my mind, where am I?! How am I here!? What's going on!? I began to weep for I did not know what else to do. But thenI heard something, something that sounded like a mixture between a hawk and cat. The sound of it made my ears hurt beyond belief! And then, it stopped. As thankful as I was for this, I knew that this might be an opportunity to find a means of escape. I tried to claw my way out of the clay like strapping, but my fingernails were no where near sharp enough to break through. I had to think, think real hard and real fast, how can I get out of this thing!! Then I remembered, I always have my army knife in my front left pocket! I quickly slithered my hand into my pocket to pull out the blade. When I finally got my knife, I immediately started to cut my way loose. I created a big enough hole to have my arms freely extended. Once I cut around my face, I was able to break free and FINALLY see... What I saw baffled me. Abstract and otherworldly technology. I wish I could fully describe what I saw, the only reference I can make is that everything was of the color white. Even the room itself was of a heaven like white. I broke through the rest of the clay substance and I fell into my knees on the ground and when I did, the floor moved like waves on the ocean. As shocked as I was, I had no time to just sit and stare. I quickly got up on my feet and ran to the closest thing that resembled a door. To my amazement, it had a regular doorknob! I opened it and saw a long, white hallway. I carefully jogged to so that if I were to hear anything, I would be able to find a place to hide. At the end of the hallway, I took a left, and then another left, followed by a right turn in which I saw the back of two incredibly large and hanous looking creatures. I waited for them to turn at the end of the hall. Once they were out of sight, I began to slowly walk forward. As I got closer, I noticed another door with a strange writing inscribed on top of it. Could this be an exit? Before I could finish deciphering, a loud alarm sprang through the hallways! I knew it was for me and I knew that I couldn't wait to find out what that door led to, so I ran as fast as I could! Many thoughts and especially questions crossed my mind, is the government doing this to me?! Did a terrorist group kidnap me!? I finally made it to the door and opened it as fast as I could! However, there was no more white, only red pierced my eyes. I saw only landscapes of red dirt and a pond of purple like substance. I was shocked. As I looked around, something clicked in my head to look up. What I saw brought tears to my eyes. An earth split into two...



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Write a poem about anger. Don’t use the word “anger” or any synonyms. Show the reader anger. Make them understand without being told.
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Pained

  You have never loved me even though I've always loved you, but now I can't love you for now I hate you! You've disrespected me, beat me, and mentally tormented me! I've followed you until I realized that you are on the level of Satan! I hope all the worst things in life happen to you and you ALONE! I hope that you trip on a rock and fall down a hill into lake invested with crocodiles!! I hope that a bug fly's on your eye while you are driving so that you crash! I know that I will regret this time, but as of right now, I loathe you, forever and always!

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Write a poem about anger. Don’t use the word “anger” or any synonyms. Show the reader anger. Make them understand without being told.
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Pained
  You have never loved me even though I've always loved you, but now I can't love you for now I hate you! You've disrespected me, beat me, and mentally tormented me! I've followed you until I realized that you are on the level of Satan! I hope all the worst things in life happen to you and you ALONE! I hope that you trip on a rock and fall down a hill into lake invested with crocodiles!! I hope that a bug fly's on your eye while you are driving so that you crash! I know that I will regret this time, but as of right now, I loathe you, forever and always!

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We are a literary agency seeking fresh talent. In 200 words or more, demonstrate your writing talent. We will be in touch with any and all promising participants throughout the rest of this quarter.
Written by Acadec56 in portal Publishing

The Death Room

    I could hear water dripping on the floor, but there was no water. There was only a room, a room with no windows and a flickering light. There was a small table and a chair in which I was strapped onto. I have no idea how or why I'm here! It feels like the room was slightly shaking, or perhaps it was just my body reacting to this haunting situation. My lips are quivering in fear, my eyes are attached to the everlasting abyss that was this horrifically dirty floor. "WHY WHY WHY!!" I said aloud. "PLEASE!! PLEASE SOMEONE, ANYONE! GET ME OUT OF HERE!!". I began to hear a clicking sound. Suddenly, the entire room started to quickly shift clockwise! The loudness of it all was unbearable. Once the tears began to run down my face, I closed my eyes and prayed. "Plleeease!! Just end it! Please!!". All of a sudden, the room stopped. I looked down and noticed that my body, starting at my feet, began to evaporate. Initially, I started to Scream in terror. But then I began to find peace. Before I went away, I heard one thing, "Damn it!!! Subject 32 failed the test! Bring out the next one, IMMEDIATELY!".

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We are a literary agency seeking fresh talent. In 200 words or more, demonstrate your writing talent. We will be in touch with any and all promising participants throughout the rest of this quarter.
Written by Acadec56 in portal Publishing
The Death Room
    I could hear water dripping on the floor, but there was no water. There was only a room, a room with no windows and a flickering light. There was a small table and a chair in which I was strapped onto. I have no idea how or why I'm here! It feels like the room was slightly shaking, or perhaps it was just my body reacting to this haunting situation. My lips are quivering in fear, my eyes are attached to the everlasting abyss that was this horrifically dirty floor. "WHY WHY WHY!!" I said aloud. "PLEASE!! PLEASE SOMEONE, ANYONE! GET ME OUT OF HERE!!". I began to hear a clicking sound. Suddenly, the entire room started to quickly shift clockwise! The loudness of it all was unbearable. Once the tears began to run down my face, I closed my eyes and prayed. "Plleeease!! Just end it! Please!!". All of a sudden, the room stopped. I looked down and noticed that my body, starting at my feet, began to evaporate. Initially, I started to Scream in terror. But then I began to find peace. Before I went away, I heard one thing, "Damn it!!! Subject 32 failed the test! Bring out the next one, IMMEDIATELY!".
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To the best of your ability, tell us which would you choose or which one is better - A broken heart or An empty one! If you will, please include the 'Why'. #BrokenOrEmpty Tag me, if you want!! Happy writing, y'all :)
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Either or

Broken hearts can be mended 

Empty hearts can be filled

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To the best of your ability, tell us which would you choose or which one is better - A broken heart or An empty one! If you will, please include the 'Why'. #BrokenOrEmpty Tag me, if you want!! Happy writing, y'all :)
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Either or
Broken hearts can be mended 
Empty hearts can be filled
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It's cliché, yes, but I still want to know -- If you could be a superhero/super-villain, what kind of power would you want?
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wolverine

To be shot or not to be shot 

If I have the healing powers of wolverine, my answer wouldn't matter!

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It's cliché, yes, but I still want to know -- If you could be a superhero/super-villain, what kind of power would you want?
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wolverine
To be shot or not to be shot 
If I have the healing powers of wolverine, my answer wouldn't matter!
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Challenge of the Week #58: You are a victim of injustice, write a story about it. The most masterfully written piece, as voted and determined by the Prose team, will be crowned winner and receive $150. Quality beats quantity, always, but numbers make things easier for our judges, so share, share, share with friends, family, and connections. #ProseChallenge #getlit #itslit
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Lady McKenzie

  Whistle Whistle Whistle all you want 

I will pay no mind to your perverted grunts 

   Stare Stare Stare all you wish 

I will ignore you and your ignorant bliss 

   Talk Talk Talk if you need 

But do not lie to your friends about me

   Never Never Never touch me without my consent 

I will make sure that your personal record takes a dent!

   Injustice Injustice Injustice to our women 

Can't we have respect from some of you men?

   Great Great Great people are out there, spreading words of peace 

Please, everyone, take these words and continue the message of peace 

    Faithfulness Faithfulness Faithfulness is all I ask 

Treat me like a person, not like your next task 

   Love Love Love needs to bloom 

When it happens, we will shine like the moon

    Shine Shine Shine

    Like as if we are giant diamonds in     the sky.

    Don't Don't Don't cry 

    You are BEAUTIFUL, Always 

     keep that in mind!

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Challenge of the Week #58: You are a victim of injustice, write a story about it. The most masterfully written piece, as voted and determined by the Prose team, will be crowned winner and receive $150. Quality beats quantity, always, but numbers make things easier for our judges, so share, share, share with friends, family, and connections. #ProseChallenge #getlit #itslit
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Lady McKenzie
  Whistle Whistle Whistle all you want 
I will pay no mind to your perverted grunts 
   Stare Stare Stare all you wish 
I will ignore you and your ignorant bliss 
   Talk Talk Talk if you need 
But do not lie to your friends about me
   Never Never Never touch me without my consent 
I will make sure that your personal record takes a dent!
   Injustice Injustice Injustice to our women 
Can't we have respect from some of you men?
   Great Great Great people are out there, spreading words of peace 
Please, everyone, take these words and continue the message of peace 
    Faithfulness Faithfulness Faithfulness is all I ask 
Treat me like a person, not like your next task 
   Love Love Love needs to bloom 
When it happens, we will shine like the moon
    Shine Shine Shine
    Like as if we are giant diamonds in     the sky.
    Don't Don't Don't cry 
    You are BEAUTIFUL, Always 
     keep that in mind!


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Another 10 word micropoem challenge: write a poem that begins with the word TAIL and ends with the word TALE. Or the other way around! Tag me, if you wish! #ATailTale
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Obelisk

Tail of Obelisk The Tormentor has created a horrific tale

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Another 10 word micropoem challenge: write a poem that begins with the word TAIL and ends with the word TALE. Or the other way around! Tag me, if you wish! #ATailTale
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Obelisk
Tail of Obelisk The Tormentor has created a horrific tale
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Shaka Zulu

If things go my way, then I will direct and bring to life the incredible Shaka Zulu! This is one of my biggest dreams right now! You all heard it first, it's going to be great!:)

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Shaka Zulu
If things go my way, then I will direct and bring to life the incredible Shaka Zulu! This is one of my biggest dreams right now! You all heard it first, it's going to be great!:)
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Fun facts are always awesome, aren't they? Write about 5 different interesting facts that you know about any subject. Tag me too. I want to learn what you know.
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Fun facts!

1.We poop wrong, use a stool to elevate your torso

2. Guardians of the galaxy got a 100% rating from a recent screening test 

3. Leonardo da Vinci invited scissors 

4. An African American, Alexander miles, invented the elevator 

5. An African American, Charles drew, invented the blood phasma bag

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Fun facts are always awesome, aren't they? Write about 5 different interesting facts that you know about any subject. Tag me too. I want to learn what you know.
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Fun facts!
1.We poop wrong, use a stool to elevate your torso
2. Guardians of the galaxy got a 100% rating from a recent screening test 
3. Leonardo da Vinci invited scissors 
4. An African American, Alexander miles, invented the elevator 
5. An African American, Charles drew, invented the blood phasma bag
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Written by Acadec56 in portal Poetry & Free Verse

She sat, he Sat

   I sat alone, longing for all of the jovial days that were never there,

   

   He Sat with three, an endless cataract of happiness unlike me.

   She sat with four, disengaged from conversation, her eyes shallow

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Written by Acadec56 in portal Poetry & Free Verse
She sat, he Sat
   I sat alone, longing for all of the jovial days that were never there,
   
   He Sat with three, an endless cataract of happiness unlike me.

   She sat with four, disengaged from conversation, her eyes shallow





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