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Does anyone else use their cellphone when on Prose? Just wondering if I'm the only one cx

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Does anyone else use their cellphone when on Prose? Just wondering if I'm the only one cx
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The writer of the best short story from this challenge wins a ProWritingAid Lifetime License, worth $140. Take the terribly-written adverb-laden outline of a story below and use your own voice to make it amazing. Maybe it's sci-fi, maybe it's romance, maybe it's thriller...it's up to you: The door was opened and they looked out. She was very surprised. He looked very worried. They went quickly to find out more. She slowly picked up the object and it all finally made sense.
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There will be war

And then there was light. We raced through a space projection, watching hundreds of different stars that were all bigger than the sun, moons that emitted a crimson glow, and many other astonishing Earth-like planets. Then, we came to a quick halt at a gigantic, complete blue, oval planet with only a small spec of green. And it all made sense. With shock and terror on both of our faces, we rushed back to the spaceship to inform Earth of this horrific situation. We strapped in, started up the Patriot, and in a few minutes, we were off. "Scarlett, let me see that orb." Said Justin. Hands shaking, I gave the orb to Justin. He stared at the cloud white orb until finally he said, "this changes everything". And he was right, everyone's lives were about to change. We both had suspected that the aliens were hiding something from us, something diabolical. That's why the government sent us, and thank God they did. After 20 years of cooperating and living with them, they were planning on stabbing us in the back. But why now? Why wait 20 years to move forward with this plan to remove Earth's Crust and implant them into their planet? Hopefully, we get answers to these questions, but there's one inevitable truth, there will be war. Finally, we landed onto our space station where general Jackson was waiting for us. "What have you found??" He said. Justin looked at me then back to general Jackson, "this Sir". And with one touch, there was light once again. After it was over, everyone in the room looked shocked, scared, and very sad. Angrily, the general shouted, "THIS MEANS WAAARR!!".

     A few months later, families were torn apart, lives were ruined, and war had began. The absolute terror and sickening landscape that war had provided, decimated both Justin and I. We tried to make things right, we tried to help as many aliens as possible, but we couldn't and Justin paid the ultimate price in order to protect me. This is all my fault. Even though Earth utilized guerilla techniques against the aliens, there's no way that we are going to win this battle. They have too many soldiers, allies and weapons. We are going to loose. We are going to die. And you whomever finds​ and reads this, please remember what my husband told me....What is loved will never fade away.

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The writer of the best short story from this challenge wins a ProWritingAid Lifetime License, worth $140. Take the terribly-written adverb-laden outline of a story below and use your own voice to make it amazing. Maybe it's sci-fi, maybe it's romance, maybe it's thriller...it's up to you: The door was opened and they looked out. She was very surprised. He looked very worried. They went quickly to find out more. She slowly picked up the object and it all finally made sense.
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There will be war
And then there was light. We raced through a space projection, watching hundreds of different stars that were all bigger than the sun, moons that emitted a crimson glow, and many other astonishing Earth-like planets. Then, we came to a quick halt at a gigantic, complete blue, oval planet with only a small spec of green. And it all made sense. With shock and terror on both of our faces, we rushed back to the spaceship to inform Earth of this horrific situation. We strapped in, started up the Patriot, and in a few minutes, we were off. "Scarlett, let me see that orb." Said Justin. Hands shaking, I gave the orb to Justin. He stared at the cloud white orb until finally he said, "this changes everything". And he was right, everyone's lives were about to change. We both had suspected that the aliens were hiding something from us, something diabolical. That's why the government sent us, and thank God they did. After 20 years of cooperating and living with them, they were planning on stabbing us in the back. But why now? Why wait 20 years to move forward with this plan to remove Earth's Crust and implant them into their planet? Hopefully, we get answers to these questions, but there's one inevitable truth, there will be war. Finally, we landed onto our space station where general Jackson was waiting for us. "What have you found??" He said. Justin looked at me then back to general Jackson, "this Sir". And with one touch, there was light once again. After it was over, everyone in the room looked shocked, scared, and very sad. Angrily, the general shouted, "THIS MEANS WAAARR!!".

     A few months later, families were torn apart, lives were ruined, and war had began. The absolute terror and sickening landscape that war had provided, decimated both Justin and I. We tried to make things right, we tried to help as many aliens as possible, but we couldn't and Justin paid the ultimate price in order to protect me. This is all my fault. Even though Earth utilized guerilla techniques against the aliens, there's no way that we are going to win this battle. They have too many soldiers, allies and weapons. We are going to loose. We are going to die. And you whomever finds​ and reads this, please remember what my husband told me....What is loved will never fade away.
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You fell in love with an Edward Cullen type, congratulations! You're gonna have a CGI Baby!!

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You fell in love with an Edward Cullen type, congratulations! You're gonna have a CGI Baby!!

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CotW #64: Write about the most hilarious thing you have ever witnessed. The most eloquent, elegant, entertaining entry, ascertained by Prose, earns $100 and stays atop the Spotlight shelf for six straight days. Feel free to invite friends, distant family, even strange acquaintances to play this challenge with you anonymously. Please use #ProseChallenge #itslit for sharing online.
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Homecoming dance

I never wanted to go to a school dance. That was one of my biggest goals of high school. However, life is funny and I got chosen by my club to be nominated for homecoming court. And with that BIG responsibility, I had to buy a ticket to the homecoming dance, yippie! While I'm there, everything was nice and smooth, nothing major or significant happened. That is until the announcement came for who would be on the homecoming court. Guess what happened. I got chosen! It was pretty exciting and I was actually pretty proud of myself. Now this is where things get FUNNY. After I got all the info about the next week's activities, I walk back into the dance floor only to be met with two friends who picked me up on their shoulders and carried me across the whole room! This was awkward and amazing at the same time! But then security told them to let me down. But this is the even FUNNIER part of the story. I have a friend, Vanessa, who is the varsity head cheer leader, and she told me before I got on the court that she wanted to dance with me. I didn't actually think that it would happen, but sure enough, it did. So I thought that I was gonna just do my two step like my brother taught me and that that would be good enough. NOPE. She did this incredible body movement stuff that memorized the inner workings of my brain. I had no idea what to do so I just grabbed her hips and two stepped. The most embarrassing thing is the fact that I kept stepping on her toes and for some reason I couldn't stop saying, "uh ... Uh.... UH..." I was way too into the feels.

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CotW #64: Write about the most hilarious thing you have ever witnessed. The most eloquent, elegant, entertaining entry, ascertained by Prose, earns $100 and stays atop the Spotlight shelf for six straight days. Feel free to invite friends, distant family, even strange acquaintances to play this challenge with you anonymously. Please use #ProseChallenge #itslit for sharing online.
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Homecoming dance
I never wanted to go to a school dance. That was one of my biggest goals of high school. However, life is funny and I got chosen by my club to be nominated for homecoming court. And with that BIG responsibility, I had to buy a ticket to the homecoming dance, yippie! While I'm there, everything was nice and smooth, nothing major or significant happened. That is until the announcement came for who would be on the homecoming court. Guess what happened. I got chosen! It was pretty exciting and I was actually pretty proud of myself. Now this is where things get FUNNY. After I got all the info about the next week's activities, I walk back into the dance floor only to be met with two friends who picked me up on their shoulders and carried me across the whole room! This was awkward and amazing at the same time! But then security told them to let me down. But this is the even FUNNIER part of the story. I have a friend, Vanessa, who is the varsity head cheer leader, and she told me before I got on the court that she wanted to dance with me. I didn't actually think that it would happen, but sure enough, it did. So I thought that I was gonna just do my two step like my brother taught me and that that would be good enough. NOPE. She did this incredible body movement stuff that memorized the inner workings of my brain. I had no idea what to do so I just grabbed her hips and two stepped. The most embarrassing thing is the fact that I kept stepping on her toes and for some reason I couldn't stop saying, "uh ... Uh.... UH..." I was way too into the feels.

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The first line of almost any story can be improved by making sure the second line is, "And then the murders began." Give it a try!
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Kevin fell asleep in the morning

Henry awoke from slumber in the evening

And then the murders began

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Kevin fell asleep in the morning
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And then the murders began

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CotW #63: Take a much-loved Disney story, twist it into an adult, kick-in-the-gut tale. Poetry or Prose. The most eloquent, elegant, entertaining entry, ascertained by Prose, earns $100 and stays atop the Spotlight shelf for six straight days. Feel free to invite friends, distant family, even strange acquaintances to play this challenge with you anonymously. Please use #twistedtales for sharing online. Now lights, camera, fiction.
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REIGN

  Sit back and allow me to tell you this tale,

About a girl who was very young and very pale

  Her parents died when she was a child,

She how lives with her stepmother and stepsisters, and they are wild

  A girl named Cinderella has to now behave like a slave, her bright world is now covered in shade like an umbrella

  One day there was a ball, the prince looking for a girl, fairest of them all

Cinderella was so excited and made her own dress,

But her stepmother ripped it, and the stepsisters did the rest

  She ran outside to cry and hide,

Then she heard a voice, somewhere near by

  Suddenly, a women flew out from the trees and landed easily as if it were a breeze

  Hello Cinderella, I see you sad and down,

Do not worry, I will make you a dress that will make all the girls frown!

   Cinderella's ripped dress evaporated into a stunning light blue dress,

  The women turned rats into horses, a pumpkin into a carriage, then said "now go! Wow the prince and he will take your hand in marriage!" 

  That night, all heads turned, 

men's mouths dropped and the stepmother's forehead began to burn

   After a dance and a long talk, Cinderella told the prince " I must go at 12:00."

  When he asked why, Cinderella didn't want to say,

So the prince said "whoever you are or whoever you were, it doesn't matter, I love you all the same."

  She told him the truth about the stepmother and stepsisters,

She began to see a tear in his eye,

And in anger he asked "would you like them to die?"

Cinderella thought and said " I cannot lie, this will make me very happy inside."

 And with a quick order, the stepmother and stepsisters were hanged

And that's just the beginning of princess Cinderella's reign.

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CotW #63: Take a much-loved Disney story, twist it into an adult, kick-in-the-gut tale. Poetry or Prose. The most eloquent, elegant, entertaining entry, ascertained by Prose, earns $100 and stays atop the Spotlight shelf for six straight days. Feel free to invite friends, distant family, even strange acquaintances to play this challenge with you anonymously. Please use #twistedtales for sharing online. Now lights, camera, fiction.
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REIGN
  Sit back and allow me to tell you this tale,
About a girl who was very young and very pale
  Her parents died when she was a child,
She how lives with her stepmother and stepsisters, and they are wild

  A girl named Cinderella has to now behave like a slave, her bright world is now covered in shade like an umbrella

  One day there was a ball, the prince looking for a girl, fairest of them all
Cinderella was so excited and made her own dress,
But her stepmother ripped it, and the stepsisters did the rest

  She ran outside to cry and hide,
Then she heard a voice, somewhere near by
  Suddenly, a women flew out from the trees and landed easily as if it were a breeze

  Hello Cinderella, I see you sad and down,
Do not worry, I will make you a dress that will make all the girls frown!
   Cinderella's ripped dress evaporated into a stunning light blue dress,

  The women turned rats into horses, a pumpkin into a carriage, then said "now go! Wow the prince and he will take your hand in marriage!" 

  That night, all heads turned, 
men's mouths dropped and the stepmother's forehead began to burn

   After a dance and a long talk, Cinderella told the prince " I must go at 12:00."
  When he asked why, Cinderella didn't want to say,
So the prince said "whoever you are or whoever you were, it doesn't matter, I love you all the same."

  She told him the truth about the stepmother and stepsisters,
She began to see a tear in his eye,
And in anger he asked "would you like them to die?"
Cinderella thought and said " I cannot lie, this will make me very happy inside."

 And with a quick order, the stepmother and stepsisters were hanged
And that's just the beginning of princess Cinderella's reign.


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Forever

Money allows generations to live

Family allows you to live happily

Legacy allows you to live forever

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What the last Airbender (film) should have done.

If you don't know by now, I loathe the last Airbender, directed by M.Night Shamalan. However, I don't want to bash a film without giving concrete suggestions on what the movie should have done. So here it is, what the last Airbender (film) should have done!!

                     TIME

  You gotta make The movie at LEAST 2 hours and 20 minutes. Sure that's a long time, but films like, Transformers Age Of Extinction, and the Lord of The Rings trilogy, all have a runtime that far surpasses my time. Not only that, but all of those films I mentioned made at least 800 million in the global box office. A 2 hour plus film will give the director and writers enough time to explore the world of Avatar.

                    CASTING

  Dear Hollywood, please just cast Asian actors in roles that require Asian actors and actresses. If you want to make some of the characters or one of the Nations filled with white actors and another nation filled with let's say, Indian actors, then I'm ok with that. BUT, at least make aang and all the Airbenders Asian or something! If that doesn't work for the fans then let the whole cast be Asian. Just give Asian actors a chance!

                NARRATION

  Since there are so many episodes In each season of TLA, having a character like katara narrate through some of the "least" important episodes. I know some people don't like narration, but if you want a good adaptation of a TV show or comic book, then narrating is the way to go.

               HAVE FUN!!!

  Just have fun!! That's one of the best parts about TLA show!! Yes, aang has the entire world on his shoulders, but that didn't stop him from being a kid, because at the end of the day, he's just a KID! Just like the rest of the main young characters. 

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What the last Airbender (film) should have done.
If you don't know by now, I loathe the last Airbender, directed by M.Night Shamalan. However, I don't want to bash a film without giving concrete suggestions on what the movie should have done. So here it is, what the last Airbender (film) should have done!!

                     TIME
  You gotta make The movie at LEAST 2 hours and 20 minutes. Sure that's a long time, but films like, Transformers Age Of Extinction, and the Lord of The Rings trilogy, all have a runtime that far surpasses my time. Not only that, but all of those films I mentioned made at least 800 million in the global box office. A 2 hour plus film will give the director and writers enough time to explore the world of Avatar.

                    CASTING
  Dear Hollywood, please just cast Asian actors in roles that require Asian actors and actresses. If you want to make some of the characters or one of the Nations filled with white actors and another nation filled with let's say, Indian actors, then I'm ok with that. BUT, at least make aang and all the Airbenders Asian or something! If that doesn't work for the fans then let the whole cast be Asian. Just give Asian actors a chance!

                NARRATION
  Since there are so many episodes In each season of TLA, having a character like katara narrate through some of the "least" important episodes. I know some people don't like narration, but if you want a good adaptation of a TV show or comic book, then narrating is the way to go.


               HAVE FUN!!!
  Just have fun!! That's one of the best parts about TLA show!! Yes, aang has the entire world on his shoulders, but that didn't stop him from being a kid, because at the end of the day, he's just a KID! Just like the rest of the main young characters. 


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The flucking last Airbender

The last Airbender film is so bad, that it makes the film, "the room" look good. M.night is frustratingly idiotioded!! What was that last scene with the flucking giant wave?? Having a flucking giant fish is SO much better!! Gosh it's such a cataract of shib!!

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The flucking last Airbender
The last Airbender film is so bad, that it makes the film, "the room" look good. M.night is frustratingly idiotioded!! What was that last scene with the flucking giant wave?? Having a flucking giant fish is SO much better!! Gosh it's such a cataract of shib!!
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Write what you want to do when you grow up or what you do. Maybe even a dream you had. Don't forget to tag me @Famewriter!
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Successful

I want to work in the film and television industry and work to become one of the most successful filmmakers in history. I want to become a EGOT, which stands for Emmy, Grammy, Oscar, Tony.

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