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You kill yourself...what happens next to your essential being?
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Everything

My essential being breaks apart and becomes every little thing; I am now everything but being everything makes me nothing, to be everywhere is like air, inescapable. My thoughts are no longer thoughts, but an extension of the clouds and all that is flying. My heart beats only when the Earth shakes, I sing only when there's a strong breeze, and I cry, when all of the world sheds a tear.

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Pitch Black: The War Of The Accursed

       I awoke to my wife holding my head and frantically yelling, " Elijah! WAKE UP!"

     "Shhh, I'm ok, love."

      "You were wailing in your sleep... I-I was worried that you had that dream again."

      " I did, but don't worry, I will be fine."

      That was a lie, I haven't been fine since the day I woke up; The day I saw the earth split into two. I sat up and kissed my wife on the cheek, but I saw that her eyes were still filled with worry and doubt. I can't blame her, for the War Of The Accursed is upon us, at least that's what the people are calling it. I do believe that mankind has had some bad luck over the last millennium; I do not believe that we are cursed. this is just another war, only this time, there are aliens involved. However, we humans will fight, we will persevere and we will win. 

       "Commander!"

        "Lieutenant, how are you today? Nervous? scared?"

        "All of the above?"

        "Haha, don't worry, I feel a bit anxious myself. Don't tell anyone I said that Harry."

        " I won't, I just came to tell you that everything is loaded and ready to go." 

        "GOOD! Now, lets go kill some Saturnians."

        I hate the Saturnians, they kidnaped me when I was a teenager, kept me prisoner with all of those innocent people, and then, they cut the earth in half. When I look at all 200,000 of my men, I see the same thing that I see when I look into the mirror, anger and rage. This battle will be brutal, many will die, but we have the key to victory... This will be a sneak attack on the Saturnians. We have developed an aircraft that is able to disappear for a short amount of time. Soon, we will land on the base and attack them in their own backyard.          "Five minutes! "The pilot said

           Well shit, here we go.

          "Men! Gather around! Today, we stand face to face with our destiny. Our friends have died, our mothers have died, our brothers, our sisters, and our cousins have died due to these abominations! It's time for Mankind to return the favor and annihilate them! It is time to show them what we humans are truly made of! A united front of all races and cultures! Are you with me!?"           "YES SIR!"

           "WILL YOU FIGHT WITH ME!?

           "YES SIR!!"

           "THEN WITH ME! NOW, TO VICTORY!"

           The door opened and my company of 2,000 ran across the red, rocky surface with a fierce determination on their faces. We ran until we saw our enemies 100 yards away, but by the time the dozen Saturnians, that were keeping watch, noticed us coming, we had already blown five of their faces off. We got cover behind some trees while an intense cataract of  Saturnian weaponry showered us. Many of my men had already died, I knew not because I saw it happen, but I heard the sound of flesh ripping apart and my men's screams.

             "Lieutenant Marshall!"

              "Yes sir!?"

              "Shoot the Grenade Launcher!"

              "Yes sir!"

               Marshall got on one knee, aimed at the base, and the yelled, "ONE IN THE WHOLE!" It shot out with an electrical wave and it created a massive explosion that made even my ears hurt. "ONWARD!!" I shouted. We ran to what was left of the base and heard screams of men on fire inside.

              "Don't shoot, let them suffer!

               "That bomb is one hell of a doozy right sir!?

              "Hell yes lieutenant! After these son bitc—" BAM!!

               "HARRY!" I yelled in deep surprise and agony.

               My men shot down the assailant, but I was too focused on my little brother to notice. His head was completely gone. I felt completely gone. Another one of my own flesh and blood lays dead at my feet. First my mom, then my father, now my brother? I had failed them all. So many thoughts swarmed through my mind: What kind of leader am I if I can't even protect my own family?? how can I—

              "Sir! What do we do now?

              "W-we need to put these fires out and send word that we have defeated our enemies in base Omaha. And please let me know if  we've taken over the other bases"

              "Yes sir."

               I walked to a nearby stone wall, sat down, and starred up at a planetary, sapphire star. It is so beautiful, and so ironic. In the midst of all this blood shed, there's this beautiful star just gazing at me and my men. I wonder if she weeps at the sight of all this madness. After all, she is the one who helped split the earth in two. It's always the most beautiful thing that does the most damage.

             "Sir, we just received word that we have all seven bases under our control!"

             Every man and woman screamed and rejoiced in this victory. The war is not over, but with the Saturnians most valuable bases in our control, we have completely turned the tide of the war. We still need to fight at the eastern and northern front. However, I am tired of fighting. I know that I need to, but I don't want to. I want to start a family, have a few kids, only fight with my wife at least once every two years instead of the once every month thing we got going on now. I want my kids to grow old with great careers and not too many regrets. I want my grandchildren and their grandchildren to know that their grandfather loved them very much. first things first, I've got to go home and tell my wife how much I love her.

              "Sir, we just received word that more Saturnian soldiers are on the way to this base, what should we do?"              "Well... I think that we should give them a warm welcome, it will be one for the history books, don't you think?"

                

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Pitch Black: The War Of The Accursed


       I awoke to my wife holding my head and frantically yelling, " Elijah! WAKE UP!"
     "Shhh, I'm ok, love."
      "You were wailing in your sleep... I-I was worried that you had that dream again."
      " I did, but don't worry, I will be fine."
      That was a lie, I haven't been fine since the day I woke up; The day I saw the earth split into two. I sat up and kissed my wife on the cheek, but I saw that her eyes were still filled with worry and doubt. I can't blame her, for the War Of The Accursed is upon us, at least that's what the people are calling it. I do believe that mankind has had some bad luck over the last millennium; I do not believe that we are cursed. this is just another war, only this time, there are aliens involved. However, we humans will fight, we will persevere and we will win. 
       "Commander!"
        "Lieutenant, how are you today? Nervous? scared?"
        "All of the above?"
        "Haha, don't worry, I feel a bit anxious myself. Don't tell anyone I said that Harry."
        " I won't, I just came to tell you that everything is loaded and ready to go." 
        "GOOD! Now, lets go kill some Saturnians."

        I hate the Saturnians, they kidnaped me when I was a teenager, kept me prisoner with all of those innocent people, and then, they cut the earth in half. When I look at all 200,000 of my men, I see the same thing that I see when I look into the mirror, anger and rage. This battle will be brutal, many will die, but we have the key to victory... This will be a sneak attack on the Saturnians. We have developed an aircraft that is able to disappear for a short amount of time. Soon, we will land on the base and attack them in their own backyard.          "Five minutes! "The pilot said


           Well shit, here we go.
          "Men! Gather around! Today, we stand face to face with our destiny. Our friends have died, our mothers have died, our brothers, our sisters, and our cousins have died due to these abominations! It's time for Mankind to return the favor and annihilate them! It is time to show them what we humans are truly made of! A united front of all races and cultures! Are you with me!?"           "YES SIR!"



           "WILL YOU FIGHT WITH ME!?
           "YES SIR!!"
           "THEN WITH ME! NOW, TO VICTORY!"
           The door opened and my company of 2,000 ran across the red, rocky surface with a fierce determination on their faces. We ran until we saw our enemies 100 yards away, but by the time the dozen Saturnians, that were keeping watch, noticed us coming, we had already blown five of their faces off. We got cover behind some trees while an intense cataract of  Saturnian weaponry showered us. Many of my men had already died, I knew not because I saw it happen, but I heard the sound of flesh ripping apart and my men's screams.
             "Lieutenant Marshall!"
              "Yes sir!?"
              "Shoot the Grenade Launcher!"
              "Yes sir!"

               Marshall got on one knee, aimed at the base, and the yelled, "ONE IN THE WHOLE!" It shot out with an electrical wave and it created a massive explosion that made even my ears hurt. "ONWARD!!" I shouted. We ran to what was left of the base and heard screams of men on fire inside.
              "Don't shoot, let them suffer!
               "That bomb is one hell of a doozy right sir!?
              "Hell yes lieutenant! After these son bitc—" BAM!!
               "HARRY!" I yelled in deep surprise and agony.

               My men shot down the assailant, but I was too focused on my little brother to notice. His head was completely gone. I felt completely gone. Another one of my own flesh and blood lays dead at my feet. First my mom, then my father, now my brother? I had failed them all. So many thoughts swarmed through my mind: What kind of leader am I if I can't even protect my own family?? how can I—
              "Sir! What do we do now?
              "W-we need to put these fires out and send word that we have defeated our enemies in base Omaha. And please let me know if  we've taken over the other bases"

              "Yes sir."
               I walked to a nearby stone wall, sat down, and starred up at a planetary, sapphire star. It is so beautiful, and so ironic. In the midst of all this blood shed, there's this beautiful star just gazing at me and my men. I wonder if she weeps at the sight of all this madness. After all, she is the one who helped split the earth in two. It's always the most beautiful thing that does the most damage.
             "Sir, we just received word that we have all seven bases under our control!"

             Every man and woman screamed and rejoiced in this victory. The war is not over, but with the Saturnians most valuable bases in our control, we have completely turned the tide of the war. We still need to fight at the eastern and northern front. However, I am tired of fighting. I know that I need to, but I don't want to. I want to start a family, have a few kids, only fight with my wife at least once every two years instead of the once every month thing we got going on now. I want my kids to grow old with great careers and not too many regrets. I want my grandchildren and their grandchildren to know that their grandfather loved them very much. first things first, I've got to go home and tell my wife how much I love her.
              "Sir, we just received word that more Saturnian soldiers are on the way to this base, what should we do?"              "Well... I think that we should give them a warm welcome, it will be one for the history books, don't you think?"

                









































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Avante Garde.
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Of what they would say

   I was afraid,

Of what he would say

Of what she would say

   I wanted love,

Anything but beauty he said

Anything but my own race she said

   I felt judged,

She's not skinny I said

She's not chubby I said

   Why do I feel this way?

Her legs are not smooth enough I said

Her laugh isn't good enough I said

   She deserves better

My thoughts never escape me

My thoughts seem to hate me

   A war within myself

Am I wrong?

Am I cursed?

I am my own swan song

I am my own hearse

   I am meant to be alone,

My smile is not worthy

My body is too hairy

My personality is unexciting

My love is dieing

   All because,

Of what she would say

Of what he would say.

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Avante Garde.
Written by Acadec56
Of what they would say
   I was afraid,
Of what he would say
Of what she would say
   I wanted love,
Anything but beauty he said
Anything but my own race she said
   I felt judged,
She's not skinny I said
She's not chubby I said
   Why do I feel this way?
Her legs are not smooth enough I said
Her laugh isn't good enough I said
   She deserves better
My thoughts never escape me
My thoughts seem to hate me
   A war within myself
Am I wrong?
Am I cursed?
I am my own swan song
I am my own hearse
   I am meant to be alone,
My smile is not worthy
My body is too hairy
My personality is unexciting
My love is dieing
   All because,
Of what she would say
Of what he would say.


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Write 3 poems. But, not just any poem! Write the poems as follows: Roses are red (Something that ends up rhyming with "red") Violets are blue (Something that ends up rhyming with "blue") They can be funny, serious, angry, sad, or violent! You do you. Good luck!
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Dread

Roses are red

I lay them on the dead

Violets are blue

Now they've come back for you

Roses are red

I want your blood instead

Violets are blue

Let me tear your epidermis off of you

Roses are red

Your eyes will shred

Violets are blue

I've come only to kill Mrs.Liu

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Write 3 poems. But, not just any poem! Write the poems as follows: Roses are red (Something that ends up rhyming with "red") Violets are blue (Something that ends up rhyming with "blue") They can be funny, serious, angry, sad, or violent! You do you. Good luck!
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Dread
Roses are red
I lay them on the dead
Violets are blue
Now they've come back for you

Roses are red
I want your blood instead
Violets are blue
Let me tear your epidermis off of you

Roses are red
Your eyes will shred
Violets are blue
I've come only to kill Mrs.Liu

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Dinner with Charlton Hammy

  WARNING- explicit content ahead

 The look on his face is priceless. He looks so afraid that I fear he will wet himself if he doesn't calm down."Shhh, I don't want you having an accident on my floor. And before you get any wise ideas, just know that your suffering will be a lot worse. Think of it as if you went to hell and spat in Satan's face, don't spit on my face John." Hmm, His eyes are truly beautiful; An oceanic color that electrifies my taste buds. But, do they or do they not taste good? Mmmm, Perhaps I will fry them and sprinkle just a pinch of cilantro on top and a small side of my very own ketchup, that will definitely make them taste good! Oh, look at this! It looks like my guest is crying. "Don't cry, my sweet chocolate drop, it will all be over soon." Hahaha, am I terrible for lying? This, you poor soul, will last for days, I want everything to taste freshly delicious. Now, where are my pliers? Ah, here they are! Oh, oh goodness, this seemed to have frighten him, now he's shaking and growling like a mad dog. So, like a mad dog, I will have to put him to sleep, for now.

 

   He's finally asleep! Now I can begin. I always love the how easy the eyes can just pop right out of the skull with just minimum effort. Hmmm, let's see, I got the oil, the flour, the salt, the pepper, the garlic, and my favorite, the Cayenne pepper, shall we begin? Ohh, the sound is lovely, like hearing the Beatles Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band on repeat. Now that the frying is done, I just need to throw in some cilantro and place some of my, soon to be, famous ketchup on the side. Finally, They are fini! I don't know much French, but I've always appreciated their culture, especially when it comes to fine dining. "DELICIOUS! Absolutely ​sublime!

I am so glad that I chose you, my friend, I wonder what your tounge will taste like. Or perhaps I will cut your little fingers off and make a soup! Or, I could even open up your stomach and remove your liver to grill them outside, and take your heart and roast it in my oven! Decisions, decisions. I do wonder what will taste best, I suppose there's only one way to find out!" Wait, what was that!? Who dares interrupt my dinner! BANG! "Police! Get your fucking hands in the air right now!"

HOW!? Who could of alerted them!? "Aghh! I see, it is his wife."

"Baby! Oh my God! Nooo!"

"Don't worry my dear, he's still alive, but just barely."

"You are going to burn in hell for this you fucking psychopath!" She said.

"Please, no bad language in front of my cat!"

"Take this lunatic into custody!" The policemen said.

"Wait, I want to know why, why did you do this to my husband?? Why him??"

"Well my dear, he had some delicious looking eyes."

And they were delicious indeed.

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Dinner with Charlton Hammy
  WARNING- explicit content ahead

 The look on his face is priceless. He looks so afraid that I fear he will wet himself if he doesn't calm down."Shhh, I don't want you having an accident on my floor. And before you get any wise ideas, just know that your suffering will be a lot worse. Think of it as if you went to hell and spat in Satan's face, don't spit on my face John." Hmm, His eyes are truly beautiful; An oceanic color that electrifies my taste buds. But, do they or do they not taste good? Mmmm, Perhaps I will fry them and sprinkle just a pinch of cilantro on top and a small side of my very own ketchup, that will definitely make them taste good! Oh, look at this! It looks like my guest is crying. "Don't cry, my sweet chocolate drop, it will all be over soon." Hahaha, am I terrible for lying? This, you poor soul, will last for days, I want everything to taste freshly delicious. Now, where are my pliers? Ah, here they are! Oh, oh goodness, this seemed to have frighten him, now he's shaking and growling like a mad dog. So, like a mad dog, I will have to put him to sleep, for now.
 
   He's finally asleep! Now I can begin. I always love the how easy the eyes can just pop right out of the skull with just minimum effort. Hmmm, let's see, I got the oil, the flour, the salt, the pepper, the garlic, and my favorite, the Cayenne pepper, shall we begin? Ohh, the sound is lovely, like hearing the Beatles Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band on repeat. Now that the frying is done, I just need to throw in some cilantro and place some of my, soon to be, famous ketchup on the side. Finally, They are fini! I don't know much French, but I've always appreciated their culture, especially when it comes to fine dining. "DELICIOUS! Absolutely ​sublime!
I am so glad that I chose you, my friend, I wonder what your tounge will taste like. Or perhaps I will cut your little fingers off and make a soup! Or, I could even open up your stomach and remove your liver to grill them outside, and take your heart and roast it in my oven! Decisions, decisions. I do wonder what will taste best, I suppose there's only one way to find out!" Wait, what was that!? Who dares interrupt my dinner! BANG! "Police! Get your fucking hands in the air right now!"
HOW!? Who could of alerted them!? "Aghh! I see, it is his wife."
"Baby! Oh my God! Nooo!"
"Don't worry my dear, he's still alive, but just barely."
"You are going to burn in hell for this you fucking psychopath!" She said.
"Please, no bad language in front of my cat!"
"Take this lunatic into custody!" The policemen said.
"Wait, I want to know why, why did you do this to my husband?? Why him??"
"Well my dear, he had some delicious looking eyes."
And they were delicious indeed.
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Guardians of the Galaxy vol. 2 review (no spoilers)

Is this new guardians movie better than it's predecessor? In my opinion, yes, but just slightly. I will give you a breakdown of the overall quality of the film and what parts I did and didn't like.

Script- 9.5

Acting- 10

Visuals- 9.5

Villain- 8.5

Overall grade- A

What I liked- 1. This movie goes into a more emotional depth with These characters that we got to know and love in 2015, causing many tear-jerking moments that made a little boy that sat next to me cry. Honestly, it was kind of funny.

2. This movie has A LOT more comedic moments than the first guardians, and it was hilarious!

What I didn't like- 1. there's a shocking revelation regarding Peter's mom that never gets the big question, Why? You will see what I mean once you see this movie.

2. Some of the scenes where characters are giving background information to the audience, felt a little forced.

So there you have it! Let me know what you thought of this film! Fill free to juice me if you want cx

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Guardians of the Galaxy vol. 2 review (no spoilers)
Is this new guardians movie better than it's predecessor? In my opinion, yes, but just slightly. I will give you a breakdown of the overall quality of the film and what parts I did and didn't like.

Script- 9.5
Acting- 10
Visuals- 9.5
Villain- 8.5
Overall grade- A

What I liked- 1. This movie goes into a more emotional depth with These characters that we got to know and love in 2015, causing many tear-jerking moments that made a little boy that sat next to me cry. Honestly, it was kind of funny.
2. This movie has A LOT more comedic moments than the first guardians, and it was hilarious!

What I didn't like- 1. there's a shocking revelation regarding Peter's mom that never gets the big question, Why? You will see what I mean once you see this movie.
2. Some of the scenes where characters are giving background information to the audience, felt a little forced.

So there you have it! Let me know what you thought of this film! Fill free to juice me if you want cx
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To celebrate the release of my new book, I am inviting you all to participate in a contest. The concept: Explore a person's struggle to come to terms with a strange, sinister, or surreal reality. This is a broad theme to encourage you to be as creative as you choose. Flash and full length stories welcome in horror, fantasy, surreal, or any hybrid genres. The only rule: Prose fiction only. Three winners will be chosen, who will receive 2000, 1000, or 500 coins + a signed copy of my collection.
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Cuttlefish Garden

So many colors. Blue making love to yellow, red walking orange, the rainbow hugging a unicorn, this is amazing! I floated to the sky with diamonds in my hands​, and saw father Peirce frowning down upon me. Suddenly, I dropped and crashed into a red ocean; I thought I was going to die. However, I quickly realized that I was not injured in any way. I looked around and I saw a woolly mammoth teaching a class of great white sharks. They all turned to me and grinned with glee. How can i stand this! What is happening!? Is this real life? No, it's a fantasy, a fantasy... that is much better than reality. Perhaps I could stay here. Perhaps I could befriend the mammoth. Perhaps I can be happy.

  "Charlie?"

  "What!? Who are you!? Where am I!?" 

  "Again huh? I'm doctor Moreno, I've come to see how you are. It's been almost a week since you've been checked into​ our facility."

  "I- I'm in rehab?"

  "Yes, Charlie."

  "Doc, I would like to go back to cuttlefish garden."

            

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Cuttlefish Garden
So many colors. Blue making love to yellow, red walking orange, the rainbow hugging a unicorn, this is amazing! I floated to the sky with diamonds in my hands​, and saw father Peirce frowning down upon me. Suddenly, I dropped and crashed into a red ocean; I thought I was going to die. However, I quickly realized that I was not injured in any way. I looked around and I saw a woolly mammoth teaching a class of great white sharks. They all turned to me and grinned with glee. How can i stand this! What is happening!? Is this real life? No, it's a fantasy, a fantasy... that is much better than reality. Perhaps I could stay here. Perhaps I could befriend the mammoth. Perhaps I can be happy.
  "Charlie?"
  "What!? Who are you!? Where am I!?" 
  "Again huh? I'm doctor Moreno, I've come to see how you are. It's been almost a week since you've been checked into​ our facility."
  "I- I'm in rehab?"
  "Yes, Charlie."
  "Doc, I would like to go back to cuttlefish garden."
            
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I've done it. I've written 100 reviews for Prose and now I need a break. It's your turn prosers. Write a review for anything (movie, show, book, game, etc.) Be a positive or negative review. Share your thoughts and feelings. Tag friends and share it on social media. Write on, Prosers!
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Revenge of the sith (review!)

Hello everyone! So, I know that many of you think that this movie isn't very good, but I must disagree. Not only will I give my final overall grade on this film but I will also explain why it's actually a GREAT film. Wish me luck lol!

Screenwriting: 6

Acting: 8

Special effects: 10

Story: 10

Action scenes: 10

  Summary- Ok! So I know that the writing isn't very good, but just about all other aspects of this film are really good. I gave the acting an 8 because Hayden actually did a very good job portraying Anakin Skywalker. Ewen McGregor is always great, and so is the majority of the other actors. Where it loses points is with Natalie Portman's portrayal of padme. She's a great actress, but she couldn't make an ok script sound great. As for the special effects, do I need to say anything? I mean com on! They are truly fantastic! Especially for a film that was made in 2002. The story was great and the action scenes, especially the lightsaber duels, are some of the best in Star wars history.

Defending the movie- some people say that anakin's turn to the Darkside is too sudden and unbelievable. But, to me, if you think that way then you weren't paying attention. First off, the ENTIRE prequel trilogy had been building up to the very moment they Anakin says, "I'll do whatever you ask". First, you have to understand and remember that Anakin was a slave! If American history teaches us anything, then we all know that slavery was the worse. Next thing Anakin knows, he's leaving his mom behind to become a Jedi, a decision that would go on to haunt him for years. Then, in the next movie we see Anakin having nightmares about his mom's death and they got so bad that he had to go and find her. In one of the most emotional scenes in Star wars history, anakin's mother says her final goodbye and she dies in his arms. Ok now this is REALLY important. There are some people out there who criticize Anakin turning so quickly and these people point to the fact that he he killed younglings. But guess what, HE'S KILLED KIDS BEFORE! Remember that scene were Anakin's mom dies in his arms? What happened right after that?? In a hate filled furry, he kills ALL the sand people in the village. Here's quote from attack of the clones, "I killed them, and not only the men, but the women, and the children." Oh, what's that? Did he say CHILDREN!? yes he did! He's killed kids before. All Anakin wanted was to save padme's life and he was willing to sacrifice anything.

Ok so there's my review, I hoped you all liked it!:)

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Revenge of the sith (review!)
Hello everyone! So, I know that many of you think that this movie isn't very good, but I must disagree. Not only will I give my final overall grade on this film but I will also explain why it's actually a GREAT film. Wish me luck lol!


Screenwriting: 6
Acting: 8
Special effects: 10
Story: 10
Action scenes: 10

  Summary- Ok! So I know that the writing isn't very good, but just about all other aspects of this film are really good. I gave the acting an 8 because Hayden actually did a very good job portraying Anakin Skywalker. Ewen McGregor is always great, and so is the majority of the other actors. Where it loses points is with Natalie Portman's portrayal of padme. She's a great actress, but she couldn't make an ok script sound great. As for the special effects, do I need to say anything? I mean com on! They are truly fantastic! Especially for a film that was made in 2002. The story was great and the action scenes, especially the lightsaber duels, are some of the best in Star wars history.

Defending the movie- some people say that anakin's turn to the Darkside is too sudden and unbelievable. But, to me, if you think that way then you weren't paying attention. First off, the ENTIRE prequel trilogy had been building up to the very moment they Anakin says, "I'll do whatever you ask". First, you have to understand and remember that Anakin was a slave! If American history teaches us anything, then we all know that slavery was the worse. Next thing Anakin knows, he's leaving his mom behind to become a Jedi, a decision that would go on to haunt him for years. Then, in the next movie we see Anakin having nightmares about his mom's death and they got so bad that he had to go and find her. In one of the most emotional scenes in Star wars history, anakin's mother says her final goodbye and she dies in his arms. Ok now this is REALLY important. There are some people out there who criticize Anakin turning so quickly and these people point to the fact that he he killed younglings. But guess what, HE'S KILLED KIDS BEFORE! Remember that scene were Anakin's mom dies in his arms? What happened right after that?? In a hate filled furry, he kills ALL the sand people in the village. Here's quote from attack of the clones, "I killed them, and not only the men, but the women, and the children." Oh, what's that? Did he say CHILDREN!? yes he did! He's killed kids before. All Anakin wanted was to save padme's life and he was willing to sacrifice anything.

Ok so there's my review, I hoped you all liked it!:)
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The writer of the best short story from this challenge wins a ProWritingAid Lifetime License, worth $140. Take the terribly-written adverb-laden outline of a story below and use your own voice to make it amazing. Maybe it's sci-fi, maybe it's romance, maybe it's thriller...it's up to you: The door was opened and they looked out. She was very surprised. He looked very worried. They went quickly to find out more. She slowly picked up the object and it all finally made sense.
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There will be war

And then there was light. We raced through a space projection, watching hundreds of different stars that were all bigger than the sun, moons that emitted a crimson glow, and many other astonishing Earth-like planets. Then, we came to a quick halt at a gigantic, mostly blue, oval planet with only a small spec of green. And it all made sense. With shock and terror on both of our faces, we rushed back to the spaceship to inform Earth of this horrific situation. We strapped in, started up the Patriot, and in a few minutes, we were off. "Scarlett, let me see that orb." Said Justin. Hands shaking, I gave the orb to Justin. He stared at the cloud white orb until finally he said, "this changes everything". And he was right, everyone's lives were about to change. We both had suspected that the aliens were hiding something from us, something diabolical. That's why the government sent us, and thank God they did. After 20 years of cooperating and living with them, they were planning on stabbing us in the back. But why now? Why wait 20 years to move forward with this plan to remove Earth's Crust and implant them into their planet? Hopefully, we get answers to these questions, but there's one inevitable truth, there will be war. Finally, we landed onto our space station where general Jackson was waiting for us. "What have you found??" He said. Justin looked at me then back to general Jackson, "this Sir". And with one touch, there was light once again. After it was over, everyone in the room looked shocked, scared, and very sad. Angrily, the general shouted, "THIS MEANS WAAARR!!".

     A few months later, families were torn apart, lives were ruined, and war had began. The absolute terror and sickening landscape that war had provided, decimated both Justin and I. It was only the one's in power that were plotting against Earth, not their citizens.We tried to make things right, we tried to help as many aliens as possible, but we couldn't and Justin paid the ultimate price in order to protect me. This is all my fault. Even though Earth utilized guerilla techniques against the aliens, there's no way that we are going to win this battle. They have too many soldiers, allies and weapons. We are going to loose. We are going to die. And you whomever finds​ and reads this, please remember what my husband told me....What is loved will never fade away.

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The writer of the best short story from this challenge wins a ProWritingAid Lifetime License, worth $140. Take the terribly-written adverb-laden outline of a story below and use your own voice to make it amazing. Maybe it's sci-fi, maybe it's romance, maybe it's thriller...it's up to you: The door was opened and they looked out. She was very surprised. He looked very worried. They went quickly to find out more. She slowly picked up the object and it all finally made sense.
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There will be war
And then there was light. We raced through a space projection, watching hundreds of different stars that were all bigger than the sun, moons that emitted a crimson glow, and many other astonishing Earth-like planets. Then, we came to a quick halt at a gigantic, mostly blue, oval planet with only a small spec of green. And it all made sense. With shock and terror on both of our faces, we rushed back to the spaceship to inform Earth of this horrific situation. We strapped in, started up the Patriot, and in a few minutes, we were off. "Scarlett, let me see that orb." Said Justin. Hands shaking, I gave the orb to Justin. He stared at the cloud white orb until finally he said, "this changes everything". And he was right, everyone's lives were about to change. We both had suspected that the aliens were hiding something from us, something diabolical. That's why the government sent us, and thank God they did. After 20 years of cooperating and living with them, they were planning on stabbing us in the back. But why now? Why wait 20 years to move forward with this plan to remove Earth's Crust and implant them into their planet? Hopefully, we get answers to these questions, but there's one inevitable truth, there will be war. Finally, we landed onto our space station where general Jackson was waiting for us. "What have you found??" He said. Justin looked at me then back to general Jackson, "this Sir". And with one touch, there was light once again. After it was over, everyone in the room looked shocked, scared, and very sad. Angrily, the general shouted, "THIS MEANS WAAARR!!".

     A few months later, families were torn apart, lives were ruined, and war had began. The absolute terror and sickening landscape that war had provided, decimated both Justin and I. It was only the one's in power that were plotting against Earth, not their citizens.We tried to make things right, we tried to help as many aliens as possible, but we couldn't and Justin paid the ultimate price in order to protect me. This is all my fault. Even though Earth utilized guerilla techniques against the aliens, there's no way that we are going to win this battle. They have too many soldiers, allies and weapons. We are going to loose. We are going to die. And you whomever finds​ and reads this, please remember what my husband told me....What is loved will never fade away.
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