Advice?
Don't make choices you'll regret.
Make sure you've saved money.
Don't act all high and mighty over minors just because you can legally go to jail now.
Remember, don't do stupid crap, because if you get caught, you'll have actual consequences.
Don't get too caught up in life; remember to breathe, and appreciate the little things. it'll do wonders for you mental health.
Take my advice with a grain of salt- I'm not even eighteen myself.
Two moons
Once upon a time, the planet we call Earth had two moons- they orbited the Earth while flirting with each other, one was Luna, the other, well, was Mani. They spent centuries yearning for each other. Sometimes, one would block the sun’s light from the other, and if they were honest, that was when they saw eachother the best. Over the years, they got closer... until they were close enough to touch.. Luna reached out to Mani, yearning, and the second she touched him, he turned to ash. All that’s left to remind her of him, is a huge crater on her dark side. Ever since, she orbits in self-exile, hoping one day, he’ll form again.
Winners
okay, after a lot of reading and rereading, there are the top three that made me feel.
#1
LuckReaper's
Words will never be enough.
I already commented, but congratulations for winning!
#2
_el_2's
the eternity that will never be.
I already commented on your piece
#3
nightscribbler's
Window of Opportunity
I loved how you turn it, like saying it's your time to do and say as you want.
Honourable mentions:
HWilson's Never Enough
LiannaC's Memories
ShayKie's Slipping away
Anonynmityiskey's How Dare You Imply I'm LAZY
SunflowersWorld's All I have
Jenevieve's not enough...
HandsOfFire's Not Enough
dctezcan 's Forever And a Day
WhiteWolfe32's time
Moonsinger128's time flies
All of the pieces were wonderful, but my brain can only take so much- if I failed to like or comment on your piece, please do not take offence, I've just been very busy!
Example
There's not enough hours in a day, to be me
Not enough hours so be who I want to be
Working long hours,
late shifts, early days,
not enough time to help them all
not enough time to even just call
not enough hours to say it's all okay
not enough time to smile and laugh,
not enough hours to waste a day,
not enough time to be a kid,
not enough hours for sweet nothings,
not enough time to calm down-
I think it's time I make time
If I die young, Perry
"funny when you're dead, how people start listenin'"
"Penny for my thoughts? Oh no, I'll sell em for a dollar/ they're worth so much more after I'm a goner"
"Ain't even gray but she buries her baby"
"who would have thought that forever could be severed by/ the sharp knife/ of a short life"
"Gather up your tears, keep 'em in your pocket/Save 'em for a time when you're really gonna need 'em, "
If it's allowed, I'd also enter "must have been the wind" by Alec Benjamin
Spring break
I'm sorry, I know my writing has been sporadic at best, I have been busy.... withreading.... and school.... and work.... and trying to keep my friends together.... anyway, I won't be back for ten, maybe eleven days, (April 10-11) So I won't be able to write... I hope you all have a great time and smile the entire time! Especially you guys with birthdays! (I only know about Jack's right now, but anyone with a birthday over these days must tell me so I can bake them a virtual cake) Good luck everyone!
uh-
So, I’m thinking you need to be more specific- whether you want us to make a sample or- imma look at the other entries-
okay, they seem confused too. I’m in, as long as I’m not busy- and as long as I can be in it after spring break-
I wake up, sluggish, and roll out of bed, plopping onto the floor. Today’s gonna be a bad day....
*someone says I’m pretty, I get 99% in creative writing (forgot the title), I am able to work without collapsing from exhaustion*
“Why is the universe determined to make me wrong?” slightly laughing, I go about my day.
This is the opposite of Raing0at's "wait, what is proserville?"