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The Twelve Days of Christmas...
I did this last year, but I think that I'll bring it back this year too... Your mission here is to make a story titled after one of the verses of the classic song: A PARTRIDGE IN A PEAR TREE/ 2 TURTLE DOVES/ 3 FRENCH HENS/ 4 CALLING BIRDS/ 5 GOLDEN RINGS/ 6 GEESE A-LAYING/ 7 SWANS A-SWIMMING/ 8 MAIDS A-MILKING/ 9 LADIES DANCING/ 10 LORDS A-LEAPING/ 11 PIPERS PIPING/ 12 DRUMMERS DRUMMING. Choose one of these and write your short tale. It doesn't have to be about someone giving them as gifts. It doesn't even have to be about Christmas at all. For example, the 5 GOLDEN RINGS could be some sort of pirate quest for treasure, 11 PIPERS PIPING could be about an elementary orchestra recital, 3 FRENCH HENS could be about a farmer and his wife in France etc. Please take a look at the entries before you join the contest to make sure there are no duplicates. I might give some $Juice$ to the entries I like best!
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The Twelve Days of Christmas...
I did this last year, but I think that I'll bring it back this year too... Your mission here is to make a story titled after one of the verses of the classic song: A PARTRIDGE IN A PEAR TREE/ 2 TURTLE DOVES/ 3 FRENCH HENS/ 4 CALLING BIRDS/ 5 GOLDEN RINGS/ 6 GEESE A-LAYING/ 7 SWANS A-SWIMMING/ 8 MAIDS A-MILKING/ 9 LADIES DANCING/ 10 LORDS A-LEAPING/ 11 PIPERS PIPING/ 12 DRUMMERS DRUMMING. Choose one of these and write your short tale. It doesn't have to be about someone giving them as gifts. It doesn't even have to be about Christmas at all. For example, the 5 GOLDEN RINGS could be some sort of pirate quest for treasure, 11 PIPERS PIPING could be about an elementary orchestra recital, 3 FRENCH HENS could be about a farmer and his wife in France etc. Please take a look at the entries before you join the contest to make sure there are no duplicates. I might give some $Juice$ to the entries I like best!
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8 maids a milking

The airports a mess. Flights canceled. Masked people talking louder and slower just to catch spelling and numbers bringing the place to a mob roar. Long socially distanced lines streaming out of every rest rooms as I walk swiftly toward a distance gate to catch a flight home while fighting the urgency of my swollen bladder.

Then, I find something called a family rest room with no line and decide to stop. I open the door and find in front of me 8 maids a milking. Single mothers, other with family including other smaller siblings standing watching silently. There is a calm broken only by the delicate sound of suckling and my out-of place big flush after a long sustained gush.

As I washed my hands in the clean well lighted place for a moment thought of sitting two in thoughtfully purchased chairs just to breath in the sweet smells of contentment.

But instead feeling lighter and less pressured walked to from my gate and took a seat feeling somehow a small bit better about the world.

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The Twelve Days of Christmas...
I did this last year, but I think that I'll bring it back this year too... Your mission here is to make a story titled after one of the verses of the classic song: A PARTRIDGE IN A PEAR TREE/ 2 TURTLE DOVES/ 3 FRENCH HENS/ 4 CALLING BIRDS/ 5 GOLDEN RINGS/ 6 GEESE A-LAYING/ 7 SWANS A-SWIMMING/ 8 MAIDS A-MILKING/ 9 LADIES DANCING/ 10 LORDS A-LEAPING/ 11 PIPERS PIPING/ 12 DRUMMERS DRUMMING. Choose one of these and write your short tale. It doesn't have to be about someone giving them as gifts. It doesn't even have to be about Christmas at all. For example, the 5 GOLDEN RINGS could be some sort of pirate quest for treasure, 11 PIPERS PIPING could be about an elementary orchestra recital, 3 FRENCH HENS could be about a farmer and his wife in France etc. Please take a look at the entries before you join the contest to make sure there are no duplicates. I might give some $Juice$ to the entries I like best!
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Uschibear
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Ten Lords a Leaping

The challenge was on. Ten guys from the dance academy versus ten from the local football team.

Ten of the biggest, baddest blockers from the front defensive line of the local high school promised to see the jocks left the dancers alone and stopped bullying them, calling them wimps, and generally picking on them by pushing, shoving and knocking them down at every opportunity.

The events were chosen, five by the jocks and five by the boys who danced in the drama productions and regularly lifted their partners while maintaining balance, grace and absolute indifference to the incredible stress on their bodies and cardiovascular systems. You never saw them panting or grunting with the effort.

Since the jocks were arrogant and certain of their win, they insisted on doing their side of the competition first. Wind sprints, agility, blocking dummies, bench press reps, and last but not least the end to end run down and obstacle course set on the local football field.

The score at the end of the first day, tied. Much to the surprise of the football team the lost the tire run for agility by and embarrassing 5 to 1 score. Wind sprints where done by running them continuously and the damn dancers kept up and the score there was tied. The obstacle course and blocking dummies went to the jocks especially the dummies which they won with a shut out 6 to 0 in their favor. Bench press was tied as the coaches on both sides agreed to a max weight limit equal to twice their body weight. The wimpy little dancers were equal to the task. Score tied there.

Next day, flexibility, clean and jerk repetitions, standing jumps to a three foot height took place in the morning. Leg presses, again with weight adjusted to the body weight of the competitor, the win decided by repetitions in a 5 minute time limit.

At the end of that the Dancers were well ahead. Standing jumps were a slam dunk in their favor with 0 points for the jocks.

When the leg presses were over, the jocks legs were jelly and the Dancers pulled into the last event with a 6 point lead. The last event? 800 yard steeplechase. One point to the winner of each race. 10 races. The stands filled at the track and field venue. By this time the local sports reporters had picked up on the competition and the entire state was cheering for their favorites.

The first races went to the football team, they put their receivers on the line and by then end of the first 5 races the Dancer's lead was down to 1 point. The crowd was boisterous, and cheerleaders divided. The ones whose boyfriends were on the football team jumped and tumbled in front of the cheering fanatical football followers.

However, there were the girls who were serious dancers. The ones who held the front line and lead the half time routines, hiding the missteps of the gorgeous queen bee and her cronies. They danced with energy and verve leading the growing crowd cheering for the underdog dancers.

Three more races and the score was tied. It was down to the last two pairs. The football players were down to their roughest, beefiest muscle bound front line blockers, and the Dancers had their best male leads for the ballet. The competitors couldn’t have been more different.

The first set lined up and the starter’s gun went off. The big center for the blocking line lumbered toward the first barrier crashing through it and splashing the the water, and the crowd groaned. The fleet footed slender dancer leaped the shrubbery clearing it neatly and landed on the far side of the watery pool. He took of at a quick jog leaving the heavier muscular broad shouldered jock in his dust.

The dancer was approaching the finish line when he hear several screams in the crowd and he looked over his shoulder to see what they were so excited about. It wasn’t good, and all thought of winning the race left his mind. He took off across the infield grass. He couldn’t take the win if this big hearted oaf was injured.

“Hey man, can you get up?”

“Yeah, who invented these torture devices?” The giant replied as he tested his ankle.

“I’m done, my ankle is twisted.”

“Lean on me. I fit right under your shoulder.” The dancer pressed up taking his weight on his weak side.

“How the fuck are you so damn strong?”

“We might not hit the gym like you do, but I lift girls dozens of times an hour in practice. I have to be able to do leaps that defy gravity, so my legs are like tree stumps.”

“Yeah but you don’t look like it. You guys aren’t the wimps we thought you were. Tougher than me,” he said.

They continued to limp around the last corner, heading toward the finish line. They crossed at the same instant, placed their right feet over the line in sync to the second. Neither of them had completed the course as required, so they were disqualified.

The teams were there to cheer them to the end. Lined up together, the sniping and jeering which had marked the first day of competition replaced by linked arms and fist bumps as their teammates completed the lap. The team captains high fived each other, and the crowd noise dropped to an unsettled buzz.

The competitors formed a circle turning their backs to those waiting for the last pair to race. With the disqualification of one set the last race would settle the competition by one point either way. There was no opportunity for a tie now.

“Do we want to settle this?” The dance captain, a tall thin break dancer asked.

“You guys gave us a run for our money.” The jock’s team leader admitted. “You could teach us a thing or two about agility and endurance. How the hell do you bend into pretzels and still have the strength to do those jumps. I swear you could clear the high jump bar better than the track team.”

“With a run and some training, sure.”

“Truce?”

“That’s all we ever wanted. We’re just differently abled.”

“No kidding. Let’s tell the folks we aren’t finishing this. A tie is good enough.”

They wove a line, alternating between the teams and waved the announcer over.

“The war is over. The jocks and the dancers have declared peace. Have a great day everyone, be proud of these incredible boys.” The speakers squealed feedback, and the crowd sat silent. The cheerleaders ran out together, forming into their traditional grid.

“Let’s hear it for the best in town.”

Pom poms waving, they yelled it again.

The two sides in the stands looked at each other and shoulders shrugged. Head shook in disbelief and one after another the audience members began to clap. The feud between the athletes and the dancers was over. Peace on earth, at least in one southern Texas town.

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The Twelve Days of Christmas...
I did this last year, but I think that I'll bring it back this year too... Your mission here is to make a story titled after one of the verses of the classic song: A PARTRIDGE IN A PEAR TREE/ 2 TURTLE DOVES/ 3 FRENCH HENS/ 4 CALLING BIRDS/ 5 GOLDEN RINGS/ 6 GEESE A-LAYING/ 7 SWANS A-SWIMMING/ 8 MAIDS A-MILKING/ 9 LADIES DANCING/ 10 LORDS A-LEAPING/ 11 PIPERS PIPING/ 12 DRUMMERS DRUMMING. Choose one of these and write your short tale. It doesn't have to be about someone giving them as gifts. It doesn't even have to be about Christmas at all. For example, the 5 GOLDEN RINGS could be some sort of pirate quest for treasure, 11 PIPERS PIPING could be about an elementary orchestra recital, 3 FRENCH HENS could be about a farmer and his wife in France etc. Please take a look at the entries before you join the contest to make sure there are no duplicates. I might give some $Juice$ to the entries I like best!
ptopping
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12 drummers drumming

Their music brought life

To anyone who listened

Audience bowed and fans cried

How did a team once invincible

Shatter beyond repair?

Mary needed to find herself

Steve no longer wanted to play

Rob said he was getting old anyway

Starting a family was the dream of Fred

Off ran Anne and soon they wed

Ellie had too much going on in her head

Bob felt lost and joined the war

Tom was tired of living on tour

Jess decided that life had more

Never to return Pete slammed the door

Chris became a motorcycle man

And that left Dan who never had a plan

So there you have it

Now you see

The death of a sound

That made its lovers feel free

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The Twelve Days of Christmas...
I did this last year, but I think that I'll bring it back this year too... Your mission here is to make a story titled after one of the verses of the classic song: A PARTRIDGE IN A PEAR TREE/ 2 TURTLE DOVES/ 3 FRENCH HENS/ 4 CALLING BIRDS/ 5 GOLDEN RINGS/ 6 GEESE A-LAYING/ 7 SWANS A-SWIMMING/ 8 MAIDS A-MILKING/ 9 LADIES DANCING/ 10 LORDS A-LEAPING/ 11 PIPERS PIPING/ 12 DRUMMERS DRUMMING. Choose one of these and write your short tale. It doesn't have to be about someone giving them as gifts. It doesn't even have to be about Christmas at all. For example, the 5 GOLDEN RINGS could be some sort of pirate quest for treasure, 11 PIPERS PIPING could be about an elementary orchestra recital, 3 FRENCH HENS could be about a farmer and his wife in France etc. Please take a look at the entries before you join the contest to make sure there are no duplicates. I might give some $Juice$ to the entries I like best!
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5 Golden Rings

Everyone had heard the stories about Harriet. They say she married four times, and still had all the rings saved up in her jewelry box. She never wore them, just kept them locked away, gathering dust.

She could have sold them and gotten some decent money. She could have worn them all as a badge of honor. She could have melted them down and made them into something different, like a necklace or a pair of ornate golden earrings.

But she didn't do any of those things. She kept them in a locked jewelry box in a locked room and left the world to wonder why she did it.

And boy, did they wonder.

Her first marriage was to a guy named Carl Deed III. A stiff name, and it fit his stiff demeanor perfectly. He had some ideas about what Harriet should be doing, and Harriet disagreed.

That was the first ring.

The second marriage was to a man named Barry Carver. Barry was a laid back, progressive, handsome art student. He didn't make a lot of money, but that didn't bother Harriet— Carl Deed III lost a key court case and had to pay a massive settlement. What did bother Harriet was the hours he spent in his room, locked away for days without saying a word to her or offering her even a shred of his time.

Harriet almost regretted ending that marriage. She really did love Barry, but he just left her unfulfilled and alone for a little too long a little too often. She couldn't take it any longer.

Her third marriage was to a younger man named Vince Dodd. Vince was young, he was loving, he was kind.

But he was a little too loving, to a little too many people.

Her fourth marriage was her worst. Jack Freud, who she biting called "Jack Fraud" was nice at first. He was rich, but Harriet had been investing Mr. Deed's money and she had an incredible sum.

Jack, of course, couldn't handle a woman having more than him. So he began, bit by bit, to control her finances, to limit her income. He began to belittle her, to isolate her, to control her.

Harriet lost everything when she finally ended things. Her money, her house, her sense of self. It all left with Jack Fraud.

For years, Harriet had given up on love. As she grew older, the world changed around her. She began living in a tiny apartment, got a job as bartender, and worked her way up the ranks.

She was alive. And for the first time in a long time, she knew who she was.

She remembered seeing the article in 2015, the summer of her 51st birthday, and she smiled. When she got her own bar, called the Four Rings, she hung it up on the wall.

No one dared to comment on it. If they had any negative ideas, they kept it to themselves, at least within the walls of Harriet's bar, because good beer and free sports TV was more important than who loved who.

The article from the New York Times that told the United States that same-sex marriage was legal created an awakening in many people, young and old.

But here, no one was willing to talk about that awakening. The only sign of acceptance in the entire town was this article posted on the wall of the Four Rings, and the only negativity was the occasional distasteful look at the framed article.

Everyone knew about Harriet's first four marriages. They knew the story behind the Four Rings, and while some people called Harriet a whore, most people just said "That poor woman" and moved on with their lives.

No one paid Harriet or her bar much attention. They came to drink, and then they left. It was as simple as that.

Harriet flipped the sign over to CLOSED as she mopped the beer stained floors. She put the mop away and she took the flight upstairs. She was getting older, 53 now, and stairs were getting hard, but every night she ignored her fiery joints and climbed the stairs to her room, stationed faithfully above the bar.

She'd heard rumors that a new family was coming to Brown street. A woman and her teenage daughter, no husband in sight.

Harriet didn't care at all. Unless she or her teen buys beer, it's not her problem. They'll just be another face on the block.

But 50-year-old Dana Schoff did buy beer. Drank it pretty heavily, in fact, but never seemed to really get drunk. She was a big woman with a high tolerance for any sort of alcohol.

Only a week after the trucks arrived, Dana found her way into the Four Rings.

"I'd like a shot," she says. "Fill it with whatever, just get me the strong stuff."

Harriet obliges. She only thinks about it for a moment: I don't get many people my age ordering strong stuff. But the thought is only there for a moment, and then she moves on and gets the drink.

Dana downs it.

"I like your article," she says, pointing at the wall.

The entire bar goes silent.

It's an unspoken rule here: no one ever talks about The Article. It's taboo. It's wrong. It's not allowed. The Article on The Wall of The Bar is merely a fuzzy blur shoved into the back of everyone's minds.

"Why, thank you," Harriet says. "I made the frame myself."

And so conversation resumes.

Dana downed three more shots before the bar closes.

**UNFINISHED**

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The Twelve Days of Christmas...
I did this last year, but I think that I'll bring it back this year too... Your mission here is to make a story titled after one of the verses of the classic song: A PARTRIDGE IN A PEAR TREE/ 2 TURTLE DOVES/ 3 FRENCH HENS/ 4 CALLING BIRDS/ 5 GOLDEN RINGS/ 6 GEESE A-LAYING/ 7 SWANS A-SWIMMING/ 8 MAIDS A-MILKING/ 9 LADIES DANCING/ 10 LORDS A-LEAPING/ 11 PIPERS PIPING/ 12 DRUMMERS DRUMMING. Choose one of these and write your short tale. It doesn't have to be about someone giving them as gifts. It doesn't even have to be about Christmas at all. For example, the 5 GOLDEN RINGS could be some sort of pirate quest for treasure, 11 PIPERS PIPING could be about an elementary orchestra recital, 3 FRENCH HENS could be about a farmer and his wife in France etc. Please take a look at the entries before you join the contest to make sure there are no duplicates. I might give some $Juice$ to the entries I like best!
roboggeek
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Nine Ladies Dancing

Special agent Shelly Jansen felt the mud soaking into her shoes, the murder scene was more swamp than pasture and yet the killer somehow left no tire tracks, no footprints and not even a trace of evidence.

Agent Robert Smith lifted the sheet and winced. “Same M.O. as the others?” he said.

“Yep,” Jansen said, “Something small caliber like a .22 long rifle, but some crazy number of shots.”

“25 rounds,” Smith said, “we’re dealing with a seriously disturbed individual”.

“Is this the seventh victim?” he said.

“This is number eight,” she said, “and they all fit the pattern, every one a dancer”.

As Jansen drove away from the scene, the rain made the roads slick, but she was deep in thought and didn’t even notice. As the wipers chattered over the scratched windshield of the government-issue sedan, Jensen was thinking about each crime scene, there was something they were missing, she knew it. Why so many rounds? It’s a message someone is sending, but we’re not getting it. Her thoughts were interrupted by her phone, it was an urgent message from special ops.

KIDNAPPING REPORTED. Calumet City 23:30 Zulu. Suspect spotted. Stand by for GPS coordinates.

Her pulse quickened as she slammed the throttle to the floor and hit the switches to engage lights and sirens. It was a farm only two miles from her location. The speedometer crested 100 as the she cut the siren and slowed to make the turn.

This never happens, she thought to herself. The local cops are always first on the scene, then the feds show up afterwards, yet here she was, going in alone and armed with only her sidearm.

Out of nowhere a bullet slammed into the dashboard as the side window blew out in a flurry of glass. She instinctively ducked down and spun the sedan left for cover, dropping it in a ditch as she hit the red panic button on the radio. She grabbed two magazines from the glove box and jumped from the car. Two more rounds punched through the windshield as she drew her weapon, but she was pinned down and the shots were getting closer….

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