Challenge
"New-Agey" poetry
The main complaint people have about modern poetry is that it's hard to understand, but that's what I love about it! I challenge you to write something thought-provoking and as cryptic as possible- something that makes the reader shake their head in wonder. Don't forget to tag me @Dream !
S i m u l a t e
How do we know that we exist consciously?
Could we all be computer sims,
watching life pass us by
unaware of our lack of control?
Or do we only exist when we feel like we do,
and when we are lost
no one else sees us too
so we walk invisibly through the streets amiss
what causes that empty feeling inside?
unacceptance? hatred? sadness? fear?
walking with tears that have always cried
and never stopped.
i hope we can be friends
add me
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