Challenge
Childhood Memories
Describe your most emotional memory, (best, worst, other) in a way that is intended to elicit empathy from the reader. Most emotionally evocative passage wins.
Divorce
I remember
sitting alone
in a room
not my own
listening
to the song
Ben
on my child-friendly
record player
and weeping
big tears,
silent tears,
though the door
was closed
and my mother
was in the kitchen
emptying her soul
to her friend –
whose home
we had
invaded –
bitter and sad
scared and worried
small and alone
so overwhelmed
that
I would
leave behind the
cathartic comfort of
the room
the song
my own
5-year old angst
and longing
to pat her shoulders
tenderly
whispering
Don’t cry, Mommy,
we will be fine
I will take care of you
I love you,
while my little girl
heart wept
alone.
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