Challenge
i miss you (haiku)
Tell me about what it's like to miss someone who wasn't yours to miss. Tag me - I look forwards to you all breaking my heart
Drowning in Silence
Drowning in silence,
A few words bubbling from you
Will delay our death.
I think the rhythm of the first line is awkward, which is perhaps apt. The language is perhaps too metaphorical and the air bubble not clear enough in the Haiku. In otherwise, perfect!