4 haikus (yes, 4!), and a problem with the editing...

See this hook i’ve got?

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walk the plank, blast ye

for disobeying MY rules,

the sharks, circling.

Overkill, but justified.

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flayed, flogged, butcherd , hung,

drawn and quartered,stoned, boiled alive,

is what i deserve.

An awful sham

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I'll be a good boy,

please don't be 'upset' with me,

drive me home when done.

be a good boy, be a good boy,

is what i deserve. be a good boy, be a good boy,

be a good boy, be a good boy, be a good boy, be a good boy,

An awful sham, this. be a good boy, be a good boy, a good boy,

-----++++++++++ be a good boy, be a good boy, be a good boy,

-----+++++++++++++ be a good boy, be a good boy, be a good boy, be a good boy,

dont be ‘upset’ with me, please,

drive me home when done.