Challenge
Hook Me
Write the best hook to the beginning of a novel. Must start with the words "As my world burned...". No longer than three sentences. Tag me!
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As my world burned, tears dripped from my eyes and rolled down the curled lips that formed my smile.
Luminescent flames danced around me, which caused my skin to switch between glowing orange and being enveloped in strange shadows.
I took a deep breath of smoke, walked towards the center of the inferno, and sobbed as I lived unharmed.