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What does worry feel like? Poetry or prose. Make it as honest, brutal, and painful as the truth.
Ended August 2, 2016 • 66 Entries • Created by misty
Challenge
What does worry feel like? Poetry or prose. Make it as honest, brutal, and painful as the truth.
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Let Me Cry for a While
Eyes peeping
through the keyhole,
I can’t see the future.
Worried with fear of
approaching battle,
whispers of prayers
escape my steeple.
Loved one struggling,
holding on to dust,
splendid suns
setting on another shore.
Breezes promise to lift up
to peaceful skies.
Let me cry for a while
a part of the plan.
Worry not of future
and enjoy the now,
love will gently take
tired breath away.
Beams of gilded light
beckon with
deathly brilliance,
memories murmur
within my solitude.
Ocean waves glide in
and flow back out
Worry is brushed
with angel wings.
sandflea68
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DaveK
The perfect read after a long hard day.
sandflea68
@DaveK Thank you, my friend.
misty
Beautiful :) I love the last line 'Worry is brushed with angel wings.' Great write!
sandflea68
@misty Thank you. This was a great challenge. Thank you for doing it.
sandflea68
@sophistifunky Thank you for reposting this.
Firdaus
I meander through your beautiful words heavy with my own. Hugs and much my friend. Beautiful heartfelt write. <3
Firdaus
*love
sandflea68
@Firdaus Your beautiful words mean a lot to me, my sweet friend. We have shared the same journey.
James
Fantastic
Teodora
Made me cry, with sadness... and hope :)
FrankieBoy
Outstanding!! Love the line "Beams of gilded light beckon with deathly brilliance," Really great piece!!
sandflea68
@James Thank you so much.
sandflea68
@Teodora Thank you so much. I cried writing it!
sandflea68
@FTJ Thank you for you very nice comments.
sandflea68
@Mzstarryeyes Thank you so much for reposting this.
sandflea68
@iaj4 Thank you, my friend, for reposting this.
Antonyo
Something written is good when it makes you feel and glad you took the time...It's beyond good when you return to read it again.
sandflea68
@Antonyo What a delightful compliment. So glad you liked it.