Challenge
"Turn your pain into art"-Ariel Bloomer
Write about some of your pain and suffering. Make it beautiful.
Why?
Feel the stinging crawl
of it
I head to see
The one.
The only one
Whose thought
They hear
Apparently
He matters.
For him
They listen.
I see
Him
They hear Him
Somewhat.
Supposed to be
For myself,
Yet hear me
They do
Not.
To the trained
Eye
Looked over
I am,
Beneath.
They can’t see
Me
What’s
Painted upon my face,
Tearing through my peace,
What jagged steps
Lest
I leave
And yet, I stay
Unfreed
Slashed by my wound
I appear
And feel not
Secure
Wrapped in
Not blankets
Not safe
In irony of,
Walls.
Wonder
How long I’ll be
Caught
Suspended
Stuck in
Fog
Watching time
Slivering off
Every dime.
Pain.
What
Happened To Me?
Spry turned
Spoiled
The fountain runneth
Dry.
Why?
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Challenge
So there I was...
Give me the greatest first-person hook of all time, starting with "So there I was..." Three sentences maximum.