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Challenge of the Week CCVI
You've found yourself standing at the gates of Hell, and you're given a typewriter and one page waiting in it. You have one short poem to either keep you out, or shove you in.
Ended September 23, 2020 • 84 Entries • Created by Prose
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Challenge of the Week CCVI
You've found yourself standing at the gates of Hell, and you're given a typewriter and one page waiting in it. You have one short poem to either keep you out, or shove you in.
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d1ss0c14te
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empire

open your fiery gates, fools

allow my creeping corruption to caress you deep inside

and bear yourselves to the darkness that resides within

until your light seeps out between my clenched fingers

whispering like coals tossed about in the tide

open your fiery gates, fools

so i may sit upon my rightful throne

with naught but a wicked smile splitting my face and a

lopsided crown of broken bones perched upon my skull

at long last, fools, your ruler has come home

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MClarice 
I love this...I chuckled a bit. It feels playful with a hint of serious on top. I believe they would be afraid to open the gates for you for fear you'd rule them. Wonderful description, too! :)
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chainedinshadow 
I really liked that line, "lopsided crown of broken bones" <3
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d1ss0c14te 
@MClarice thank you! that's exactly the vibe i was going for :)
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d1ss0c14te 
@chained in shadow :) thanks
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HandsOfFire 
this is both terrifying and so utterly perfect I loooveee it!!! :D
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d1ss0c14te 
@HandsOfFire muahahah ;)
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querencia 
YESSS! I don't know how I missed this one... great job!
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d1ss0c14te 
@DoveRaptor haha thanks