Seeing With the Mind, Not the Eyes
Lift the veil of your blackness
in the spirituality of deep night.
greet the rosy red hue of sunrise
kissing your skin with passion.
See with your heart the purple
softness and love mingling with red.
Thumb the rough bark of brown tree,
warmth of dead plants, decaying,
earth opening up to burgeoning life.
Stroke green to absorb virgin growth,
imbibing freshness of clean health,
like a minty taste on your tongue.
Brush the blue of cold water, gurgling,
smell its salty brine wafting around you.
Caress blush on your cheeks in red dashes,
heat emanating in color of spicy passion,
flashes of anger and intensity, overwhelming.
Whiff wind-whipped stormy colors of grey
breathing sweet ozone and new breezy air.
Peel the pebbled skin of an orange, taste
sweetness like the tropics, round like
the orange globe of the sunset in sky.
Savor yellow, like a ripened banana
nourishing and sweet, drawn into soul.
Wrap white of purity and cleanliness,
cocooning your body in soft simplicity.
Expand all your senses to see the beauty
light touches of color grazing your skin.
Fiction—Introducing Roco
[This is a shorr story set in the world of my novel, Roco, which is about a squirrel who turns into a human. I wrote this piece solely for this challenge—it's not an excerpt, although it features characters, themes, etc., from the novel. More technical details after the sample.]
The squirrel paused on the treeroad—really, a few branches in the proximity of each other—and surveyed the forest floor. To us, the squirrel would have looked like any other Western Gray with his silver fur coat and creamy white belly all shadowed by a tail-banner.
But to other rodents, this squirrel was instantly recognizable from tiny unique features on his face, ears, and fur, and by his smell—a mixture of oak tree, sugar breath (his family had a secret patch of berries), vinegar, and rectum. His name was Oakbear.
“Roco!” shouted Oakbear at the still woods. "You've gone too far!"
Oakbear had come to a perimeter in the trees invisible to us but easily detected by the sensitive nose of a squirrel. Here was a disturbing lack of familiar smells, specifically the fur trace and rectum oils of the Village. Oakbear didn't know this forest except in the abstract. These trees hadn't been frequented by squirrels for a few summers because the dreys had become nesting sites for owls. In chasing season, those damned birds hunted tirelessly, mostly for mice but sometimes four-legged meat as big as a Western Gray. While the Village hadn't heard hoots this year, it didn't mean there wasn't a nest being developed somewhere. In the heat of the chase, if a squirrel wasn't careful, he might find himself embraced by claws sharper than a broken beer bottle.
Vibrations on the treeroad told Oakbear someone was coming. He looked back, his head motion almost mechanical, and peered into the leaf-cover with a discerning black eye. But it was only Sudry, a pup about the same age, who still lived in a drey with his parents.
It was apparent Sudry's parents had just birthed a new litter, because the squirrel's fur had the sour scent of nursing whelps. To give you a complete account, Sudry smelled like sour hair, wet leaves, botfly, cinnamon, and rectum. He had a few things to work on before he’d be a suitable mate. The Western Gray's scientific name is Sciurus Griseus, phonetically 'greasy scurrier,' an apt description here.
"Where is she?" asked Sudry, panting.
"Somewhere around here," grumbled Oakbear. "You know, every other female lets her mate catch her after awhile. Somehow I ended up chasing the one squirrel who doesn't want to be caught."
"Maybe she's not ready to settle down."
"But I have the drey in Meadowbrook. The one with the view of the valley. And I have access to a bear's horde of berries. And—" Oakbear struggled to think of more reasons why he was such a desirable squirrel. "And I'm strong!" To prove his might, Oakbear picked up a bark beetle and broke it in half. Sudry tried to look impressed, but he'd seen all of this before. "And—"
"And your cheeks," said Sudry.
"Right! I could fit a hawk between these chompers."
"Mind, too."
"Thank you! Almost forgot—I have the memory of a bluejay. Never misplaced a cone."
As Oakbear reviewed how fast he could scamper, how many worms he could dig up, how warmly he could cuddle, Sudry watched a squirrel wriggle onto a branch overhead. Then a cone plonked on Oakbear's back.
"Owl!" shouted Oakbear, jumping away, his hair jutting out like a porcupine. He would have fallen right there if his leap hadn't luckily taken him to another branch—a branch which he clung to tightly, upside down.
Above, a high-pitched: "Rocococo!"
Roco also looked like every other Western Gray Squirrel, although she was a little slimmer, having been something of a runt. Although Sudry couldn't smell her from his branch, he knew she was an odd concoction of familiar and exotic scents. Even if she smelled of the usual fungus, nuts, moss, the sides of trees, carcasses, bugs, and mud—they were not the fungus, nuts, etc., of the Village.
But Roco was not named for her smells. Instead, she was named after her ululating laugh, which sounded something like“rocococo.” It was an odd thing for a squirrel to do. Although squirrels often lived carefree and simple lives, they were more prone to scold than scoff. But Roco was always laughing, and at events nobody else found funny. She chuckled when Hepper’s mate discovered her husband had eaten all the foodstores for winter—she rococo’d when Mottle mistook a pebble for an acorn—and she collapsed when Elder Smells-Like-Bark-Beetle accidentally fell on a beaver. Now, her prank was creating all sorts of undignified chatter.
"Roco, you could have killed me!" shouted Oakbear. Roco downclimbed (for treetrunks are highways to squirrels) and stood on Oakbear's branch.
"Still chasing me, Bearbutt?"
"Yes," said Owlbear, looking nervously at the forest floor. Squirrels were immune to the fear of heights, but Owlbear was unaccustomed to being vulnerable.
"Why don't you go find some pretty pup in the Village and leave me alone?"
"But—my berries," reminded Oakbear.
Roco made a choking noise, and for a moment they thought she was sick. Then she coughed up a slimy blue pebble.
"Already found your patch. Thought your family could squirrel that away forever?" Roco looked to Sudry, who was watching her shyly. "Hello, friend."
"Hello."
"Race you to the lake."
With that, Roco leaped away, taking the treeroad deeper into the wood. Her two suitors, however, didn't need any more prompting to head back.
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Regarding the Novel
Title: "Roco"
Genre: Modern Fantasy (Native American & Norse Mythology)
Target Audience: Teenagers and above.
Age Range: 12+, although it's YAF, I think twentysomethings would enjoy this, too.
Word Count: 50,000+
Author: Desmond White
Project: Modern fantasy is a popular genre right now, and my book comes at it from an interesting angle: a squirrel turned into a human! Plus, I'm going to catch those nostalgic Animorph fans.
Hook: A squirrel who's been turned into a human must rescue her friend from an ancient order of snakes who inhabit (and control) people's bodies.
Synopsis: Roco's mother, Nutsour, filled their warm, comfortable nights in their drey with stories about ancient squirrel heroes outwitting all sorts of nasties—from hawks to foxes to eagles to bears. One day, the opportunity for adventure presents itself when a human girl on the run (and slowly recovering from a poisonous bite) hides in the Crown, the squirrel's hill-village. The girl, who can use spellrunes to perform feats of magic, is able to communicate with the squirrels, and soon contracts Roco to be her sentry in exchange for bits of a granola bar. The girl saves Roco's life when the squirrel is attacked by an owl—an act that reveals the girl's position to her pursuers. Now, Roco must rescue the human girl from these mysterious enemies (which look like human beings but smell like slithering things) on an adventure that will pit her wits, and her mother's stories, against ancient monsters and mages. Roco's story becomes even stranger when a "helpful" ancient spirit, in ironic jest, turns her into the most powerful creature on the planet—a human being. A human girl, in fact.
Regarding the Author
Bio: A high school teacher who writes when his students aren't looking.
Platform: Prose, Personal Blog
Education: UCSB College of Creative Studies (B.A. in Literature); HBU (Master of Liberal Arts)
Writing Style: Poetic, Concise, with a snap of Snark
Hobbies: Playing & Designing Board/CardGames; Reading & Discussing Philosophy, Rhetoric, and Old Books; Doting on my Wife and her two Evil Cats
Hometown: Sugar Land, Texas
Age: 27, going on 28 in August
Website: www.desmondwrite.com
Twitter: @desmondwrite
Weaving the Magic
Do you believe in Prose
in a writer’s beating heart?
The phrases can free author
whenever glad tidings start.
And it’s magic, when the words
capture the stars in your sky.
Bliss flows in with tales of yore
dancing pages of bewitchment
free your soul and let you fly.
If you believe in magic
tattoo your feelings with Prose
and just maybe, if ambiance is right
you’ll tap, tap, tap all night long
doing the salsa with other Prosers
meeting tomorrow, late at night
and we’ll conjure some magic words
because the wizardry is in you and me
and Prose gives us the platform
to create visions of all we can be.
Do you believe, like I believe
that the magnetism of Prose
will set us free to see
how much we owe
to Prose who allows
creativity to flow free?
Mouthful of Fresh Air
I’ve drowned many times before
hints of twilight overcome
where dark shadows loom
jars of salty tears
inside brittle ocean walls
I’ve drowned many times before
weeping white crests of time
carrying anguish in my seaweed
opening undertows of dread
swept out to sea of no return
I’ve drowned many times before
clouds of my breath
sorrowfully head home
as I swim long strokes
of a cerulean beginning
I’ve drowned many times before
caught in the shallows
I plan my break
in dawning of red globe
of enveloping sunshine
I’ve drowned many times before
slow rhythm of the wind
whispers on my skin
morning tide tiptoes
cleansing my soul.
Water-borne daughter
Born in a storm
Besides the banks of the Thames
Grand-daughter of the sea
Sailor's blood waves in me
Cruel fate raised me in a desert
cracked skin,
parched soul,
I ran to the sea,
San Diego 'n' me
Wet footprints in the sand
Sharp, salty tang in my nose
The water laps, laps at my skin
I drink you in.
But fate and jobs
led me back to the desert
where I wither, a sour grape
a hard raisin, unchewable
I just need water
for a sea-borne daughter
whose cells dry up
and flake away in the heat
of a desert day.
howl
in the wake of our discussion,
we hurl insults like grenades,
like bomb vessels bursting, a
face-off at opposite corners
of the room, and rage rends
the air, lends the atmosphere
a note of storms clawing at
our beached bodies, a volley
of venomous spray, when you
tell me that everything i do is
mediocre and i retaliate with
the observation that nobody
likes you, you are friendless
and alone, always, then you
scream, you stupid cunt! and
the windows shudder with the
volume of our passing—please,
love, don't remember this, i
walk
towards you now,
closer and closer
with my mouth hanging open,
my mouth is a black hole
growing,
a maelstrom that
shatters my face apart,
a hole from
which
my howl
emerges
coming up to
find you,
grind you, it rises
from the crouched ladder of
my skeleton,
a furious noise
obliterating everything,
it swallows up
your voice
and erases
your words
Who Am I?
Lulling you to slumber
a repetitive rhythm
cooling your toes
in sunset tinges.
Hold your breath
to explore my depth.
When I lose my temper
walk away from me
until I wrap you
in harmony.
I’ll burnish your skin
and raise your heat,
leave your soul refreshed
without missing a beat.
Embracing you at dawn,
I’ll show you passion
again and again.
I’ll shift your emotions
and stir you in squalls,
I’ll toss you about
but you’ll rise
to the surface.
I’ll be there for you
I’m not going anywhere,
your’re deep within
my loving womb
as I give birth
to ebbing peace.
Today I Fly
I weep for wind
and flight,
swooping on wings.
I lift my soul
circling the sun
in blink of an eye,
wrapping my feet in
hollow feathers.
Let me float over stars
and under the moon,
a fantasy of spinning,
hovering above
filmy clouds of light,
dancing in tangos
of silky breezes.
All life can be seen
when looking behind,
born to fly high
above tomorrow.