I Am A Student Of:
Astrology: I saw our destiny within the stars
Cardiology: I know your heart so well
Haematology: Your love oxygenates my blood
Psychology: I can read your every thought
Seismology: The earth moves when we make love
Lithology: Everything rocks when we become one
Theology: I praise God for every moment
Neurology: I get a tingly feeling all over
Volcanology: You make me feel so hot
Toxicology: I am drunk with love
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Faker #1, Faker #2, we all fake a bit sometimes
Why do you feel like you have to act like this around me?
You filter out words, sentences, looking me in the eye but not talking,
Deciding which words to keep
Before you speak.
I try to impress you, try to make you enjoy my company.
I feel so stupid, with you right next to me
I sputter out phrases and try to get some empathy
Telling bad jokes to make you like who I try to be.
Why are we both so fake?
Maybe if we were real, we'd laugh at our mistakes
Instead, we drown each other in sweetness
Hiding our real persona, as if we're more than this.
I've faked with you so much
That I don't even know
Who I am anymore.
You've played the game, too
And you're just
As confused.
Reviews
When you put something you've worked so hard on out in the world, it's a bit hard to thicken your skin fast enough to let the bad opinions bounce off you.
Lucky for me, I learned years ago.
A bad review is usually from someone who either has a great critique or someone who goes off on The deep end and begins talking about shit that doesn't matter.
You can't expect every book to be War and Peace. That's now how it works. Creativity in every single one of us is different. If it wasn't, everything would be the same.
So to the haters (or one in particular), I say:
Put your heart on a platter and give it to the world...
Let's see how it plays out for you.