Consciousness Creates Form and Not the Other Way Around
Whose words these are, I think I know.
I’m out of rhymes; my mind’s too slow.
Thought comes first. It’s so absurd.
Then form arises as preferred.
If you’ve heard a sacred word
(in deed or dream), what has occurred
is deeper than you’ll ever know
until you finally learn to grow.
In each moment, we go and go.
Down the stream, we row and row
finding all the things we’ve stirred
staring back at us transferred.
Still, we progress undeterred
spreading like a flowing herd.
The light inside our shifty show
continues to just glow and glow.
Don’t Fear The Reaper. Or the De-esser...
Hello, Writers and Dear Readers.
In today's vid, we browse the talent of last week's CotW, and introduce this week's Challenge, number 233. Had a good time with this one. When I processed this audio, I realized after that I hot-keyed an extra de-esser, which normally just tames the sharp SSSSS-sounds known as sibilance, so it resulted in many ssssss sounds coming out as ttthhhh sounds. Haha. -And I had a choice, soldier through with the upload, or spend hours restoring the audio, or start over. Good chance no one will even pay attention to it like I do. But I did notice it.
What I also noticed was the level of writing here. I am so glad I didn't have to pick the top piece on this one. But I'm also glad I was able to narrate it, muted esses aside.
The writing on Prose. is unmatched by anywhere else.
Here's the new CotW.
https://www.theprose.com/challenge/14165
And here's the video for the talents within The Reaper. And the winning narration.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kj9RetBaITg
And.
As always...
Thank you for being here.
-The Prose. team
Black and Mild
Creamy, sweet,
thick curling smoke that drifted
from between my parted lips
and left aftertastes of charred vanilla
nestling coyly on my pointed tongue
Could I go back,
that's how
I would have recounted
my affair with the cigar
for the look you gave
when I could not describe the flavor
burns a hole in me
even on this cold and distant day
time.
lugged across the windowsills of change
same spot, sweeping seasons, slipping me strange
gripping grass tufts till my fingers become dirt and hinge
i'll watch yellow weeds turn violet in rainy mid july
i'll watch the sky swim from navy to goldfish orange
i'll watch the ripples run and die
yet you'll watch me olden and whoop and weep
finding my ever-flitting keep
let me breathe here eternal, to try
and watch time laugh loud, as it strides by
devil’s spotify.
You've got devilishly awesome taste in music. In fact, it's really crossing a border; hell's border. Satan is supposed to take you into his humble abode and warm embrace, but the waiting room down there is a little full so he decides to offer you a too-good deal with the prize being a ticket straight to heaven. What horrible nail-scratchingly devious song would play in Hell's waiting room to really set the mood? You've got to really deserve the ticket- everyone has got to be writhing in agony.
weighted eaves.
cattails gossip 'round the lusty pond
red-winged blackbirds grasp
their curving claws into the tall grasses
the greens bow their tips into the dank soil
sinking and warping
struggling for summer sky
wings flutter blade to blade
searching
all i do is watch
and breathe it in
that stinking desperation
and an echo in their eyes
earth, do you hold me?
or am i sinking obliviously
on writhing lifelines
hounding flies and
seeking footing in these towering eaves
the weight of me is murderous
the size of me is piddling
wings flutter blade to blade
breathe it in.
haircut
they say that hair holds memories
well, you cut all yours away
our friends crowded in your green tile bathroom,
taking turns snipping the strands,
letting them fall
letting me go
i was over the atlantic somewhere
when i stopped fitting in your hands,
and your heart, and your hair
we made eye contact at the carnival
you are so tan, and your eyes are so blue
the connection lasts a breath, yet i ache --
i hardly recognize you
taraxacum tears.
Wandering the breezes
Lost in the cerulean
Blonde hair bed head sleaze
Sunbeam's spit spattered on green
I spill secrets with the wind
And swim with the tall grasses
Sleeping where life is skinned
Through the cracks and the brasses
Yellow tainted hands
Hand me to mother
Tooth-gap smiles and
a bouquet- make another
Blow me
Braid me
Brew me
Kill me
Now you grow to call me "weed"
A salute of the slums
Wild thug of the treed
A white picket criminal glum
I am the garden's villain
The sunny overkill
Living is my sin
Trespasser on the hill
Am I not enough
When did I become but a seed
You mow me out like scruff
I pray ask, do I not bleed
My white tears spill up to the blue
A forgotten flower by you
brooklyn baby <3
I'm an absolute music addict so there's no way I can have a singular favourite. Instead, I decided to choose a song from my fav album + singer!!
Brooklyn Baby - Lana Del Rey
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T5xcnjAG8pE
Lyrics:
[Intro]
Da-da-da-da-da-da-da
Da-da-da-da-da-da-da
Da-da-da-da-da-da-da
[Verse 1]
They say I'm too young to love you
I don't know what I need
They think I don't understand
The freedom land of the seventies
I think I'm too cool to know ya
You say I'm like the ice, I freeze
I'm churning out novels like
Beat poetry on amphetamines
[Pre-Chorus]
I say
I say
[Chorus]
Well, my boyfriend's in a band
He plays guitar while I sing Lou Reed
I've got feathers in my hair
I get down to Beat poetry
And my jazz collection's rare
I can play most anything
I'm a Brooklyn baby
I'm a Brooklyn baby
[Post-Chorus]
Da-da-da-da-da-da
Da-da-da-da-da-ya-da
Pa-da-da-da-da-da-da
[Verse 2]
They say I'm too young to love you
They say I'm too dumb to sing
They judge me like a picture book
By the colors, like they forgot to read
I think we're like fire and water
I think we're like the wind and sea
You're burning up, I'm cooling down
You're up, I'm down
You're blind, I see
[Pre-Chorus]
But I'm free, ooh
I'm free
[Chorus]
Well, my boyfriend's in a band
He plays guitar while I sing Lou Reed
I've got feathers in my hair
I get down to Beat poetry
And my jazz collection's rare
I can play most anything
I'm a Brooklyn baby
I'm a Brooklyn baby
[Bridge]
I'm talking 'bout my generation
I'm talking 'bout my newer nation
And if you don't like it, you can beat it
Beat it, baby
You never liked the way I said it
If you don't get it, then forget
'Cause I don't have to fucking explain it
[Chorus]
And my boyfriend's in a band
He plays guitar while I sing Lou Reed
I've got feathers in my hair
I get high on hydroponic weed
And my jazz collection's rare
I get down to Beat poetry
I'm a Brooklyn baby
I'm a Brooklyn baby
[Post-Chorus]
Pa-da-pa-pa, pa-de-da
Te-de-de, da-da-ah
Ooh, oh, woah-ah
[Chorus]
Yeah, my boyfriend's pretty cool
But he's not as cool as me
'Cause I'm a Brooklyn baby
I'm a Brooklyn baby
[Outro]
Pa-da-da-da-da-da-da
Da-da-da-da-da, baby
Ah-ta-da-da-da-da
Da-da-da-da, baby
Pa-da-da-da-da-da
Pa-pa-da-pa-da, yeah
Yeah, yeah
My spotify account:
https://open.spotify.com/user/xu99nvqhuzyh5dfd2ztrdvrei?si=41d44ae4a35f4001