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What happens when the sun sets?
Does it die or disappear? What comes in this moment or the next? Whatever you decide it is, and however you do so is welcome :)
Ended March 5, 2020 • 20 Entries • Created by CoconutTurtles
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What happens when the sun sets?
Does it die or disappear? What comes in this moment or the next? Whatever you decide it is, and however you do so is welcome :)
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TeaRise
• 80 reads

Appreciate a Mother’s Love

A setting sun subsides into the ground

melting slowly as her colours explode in vast expanses

her fluid soul reaching out as if hugging the earth

wishing and begging for its cold and young outer shell

to love her mother back.

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What happens when the sun sets?
Does it die or disappear? What comes in this moment or the next? Whatever you decide it is, and however you do so is welcome :)
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Okami_Seele
• 56 reads

Setting Suns

The sun sets

and rises in the east.

The moon sets

and rises in the west.

A constant chase

where the moon loves the sun.

They can never touch

or even see the other.

So when the sun sets

and the moon rises.

They cry their love-struck tears.

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What happens when the sun sets?
Does it die or disappear? What comes in this moment or the next? Whatever you decide it is, and however you do so is welcome :)
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Mazzmyrrheyes
• 121 reads

Golden Hour (repost)

Sun dips evening’s essence

In her honey colored light

Amber effervescence

Draws long shadows ’fore the night

Resting on a bed of waves

Tide‘s sonnets sing to sleep

Her pulse slows and perfusion fades

Death nears as colors weep

Star’s lost luminescence;

Sky’s curtain’s drawn to veil:

Her rising, Dawn of Radiance —

Eternally, she dwells

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What happens when the sun sets?
Does it die or disappear? What comes in this moment or the next? Whatever you decide it is, and however you do so is welcome :)
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libbythepencil
• 102 reads

The sleeping sun

The mischevious wink of the sun

hiding behind the clouds

blinds me for a short moment

Then, it begins to fall

Slowly, but surely

The moon is blanketing it with a great eiderdown of darkness

Like a loving mother tucking in her child

At first, the sun resists

Reluctantly splaying out the last sunbeams out at the colourful clouds

But it slowly falls asleep,

Snores becoming the soft breezy zephyr tickling my face

Satisfied, the moon beams at me triumphantly and its smile

Lights up the sky with twinkling stars

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What happens when the sun sets?
Does it die or disappear? What comes in this moment or the next? Whatever you decide it is, and however you do so is welcome :)
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dctezcan
• 79 reads

The sun in my sky

The sun sets on me

and rises there

where you are;

in that moment,

when we are both awake

starting

or ending

our day,

the phone rings

and I am happy:

the sun in my sky

is bright again

though it is the moon

outside my window.

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What happens when the sun sets?
Does it die or disappear? What comes in this moment or the next? Whatever you decide it is, and however you do so is welcome :)
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Rlj
• 52 reads

He's reprieved and yet

he cannot forget

her. She takes his place

at night. She's searching

but doesn't find him.

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What happens when the sun sets?
Does it die or disappear? What comes in this moment or the next? Whatever you decide it is, and however you do so is welcome :)
Cover image for post I Know What Happens When The Sun Sets, by CEH4255
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CEH4255
• 109 reads

I Know What Happens When The Sun Sets

So, it’s actually not that interesting. I’m the guy in charge of making the sun “set”, literally all I do is push a button in my office that starts the countdown. I’m in charge of the eastern hemisphere, my friend Diane does the west, and we have relief shifts to cover changes in the seasons. I’m actually just an intern here, this is one of the most boring parts of the job followed by Ocean Tides and Flight Cancellations (yeah that’s us). I’ve been at this desk now for 865 years, just watching the sun go up and down, I’ve requested a transfer to Infectious Diseases a few times but it’s been denied; I’m still pretty green apparently. This job does have its perks, my favorite part though is watching you guys when the sun starts going down. Most of you are too busy driving home or cooking dinner to even notice it, I guess that’s understandable though, it is super boring. Some of you, I’ve noticed, tend to stop for prolonged periods and just stare at the sun as I set it. Like for a moment, life slows down and you are reminded all of a sudden of the endless passage of time. Some people value it more than others, I’ve seen painters depict my work for generations, mimicking the spectrum of fleeting lights in the sky with their brushstrokes and pens. I’ve heard songs exclaiming the “beauty” or “intensity” of this moment of the day. I’ve seen people fall in love, cry in dispair, some even just sit reflectively exploring the inner universe of their minds. The sun brings something out in you, some kind of deep-seated longing for adventure. I can remember a time when all you had was the sun to depend on for time, directions, even livelyhood; the job felt a lot more important back then. But It’s like you guys still worship this thing even though you know that it’s just a star, one of billions just like it. That’s really what I admire about humans, they can take even the most boring, scientifically reduced and overly explained phenomena and attach significant emotional expression to it. It really makes the job feel worth it.

So, I know what happens when the sun sets. Humans watch it.

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What happens when the sun sets?
Does it die or disappear? What comes in this moment or the next? Whatever you decide it is, and however you do so is welcome :)
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OceanOfStorms
• 132 reads

Evanescent

this word is what I thought of

i tried to write a poem

something to capture the endless

and somehow instantaneous

beautiful moment of evanescence

(which is a fancy way to describe something that fades quickly)

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What happens when the sun sets?
Does it die or disappear? What comes in this moment or the next? Whatever you decide it is, and however you do so is welcome :)
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soggynacho06
• 37 reads

What happens when the sun sets?

When the sun sets half of the world is thrown into darkness,

But the other half rises into the light.

It's simply put as day and night

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What happens when the sun sets?
Does it die or disappear? What comes in this moment or the next? Whatever you decide it is, and however you do so is welcome :)
theinkedbee
• 121 reads

Goodnight Sun

Does the sun go to sleep

when the night comes to keep?

Does it turn off its bright

for a starry night light?

Does it sleep on cloudy pillow

cuddling a plush armadillo?

When the night comes to keep,

One hundred things leap,

before returning to Little Bo-Peep.

The sun counts all the sheep

and only then does it sleep.

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