As a teacher, I constantly comment on and correct my students for their tendency to overuse run-on sentences causing unnecessary confusion for the reader with constant, consecutive clauses and confusing prepositional phrases strung together without a chance to catch a breath, leading the reader to lose track of the original thought with which the author started before running on and on and on with that repetitious, repeated, redundant rhetoric that remains largely, hugely overstated causing skepticism of the authority of the author who tends to lean on hyperbole and repetition to prove his points rather than clinging to concise, consistent controlled thoughts with clear beginnings and endings by which the reader may understand and follow the intent of the author rather than wandering around on rabbit trails through endless ramblings and explanations that tend to hop around the main issues and bound into thickets of misunderstandings which frustrate the reader encouraging him to high tail it out of that particular work of literature and leap into something more concise that does not ramble on and on with repeated repetition, rendering him unable to remember the writer's original point and perspective causing him to have to return again and again to the original point of the sentence before it rambled on into those clauses and prepositional phrases becoming a run-on sentence.

eyes so bright 

soul so dark 

mind so lost 

heart almost dead 

world almost ending

pulse stagnant

days numbered 

hours shrinking 

light dimming 

time receding 

horizon closing 

sunsetting 

moon rising 

and the gates of the graves 

opened up and swallowed me into the floor .

"True love is a myth

a legend told

to children, 

ages old

Prince Charming

on his knees

Prince Charming,

on a white horse;

Love is a concept

impossible

to the mind

inconceivable"

...Until Maleficent

bornes a daughter

All I ask for is an opportunity. An opportunity in the form of a camera; one I could use to continue making videos for YouTube. The only camera that I have is the one on my phone and I must say, the quality is pretty awful. Which is why I ask this of you. Help me continue to pursue my passion, my heart, and my success. 

    P.S. MERRY CHRISTMAS!!

She was beautiful 

The way she looked at me, her eyes dazzled like Galileo's, looking towards the stars 

Her smile made even the darkest days Seem bright 

Her Love was like no other, it extended from mind body and soul 

  So why did I leave her? 

She was beautiful

But my eyes did not dazzle when I saw her 

My smile was forced not meant 

I did not love her, I was too young and I took her for granted

Till this day... This is my greatest regret.

You absorb

my soft-boiled will

into the cavity 

of your impetuous chest

I embed

myself between 

your heart 

and your gallbladder.

I delude myself 

that I wear 

your very skin and think

your every thought

I am birthed of you

only different, traits

passed from 

you 

to me

as if from 

flowering, fertile

mother to 

greedy, myopic embryo.

I am you

only more

the large world outside us

and beyond

still never sufficient

beyond what

you chose 

to nourish me.

the only thing i wish

is to go back in time

and say no

so i can be free

 and leap in the sky

and spend all my time there

being free and in joy

i wish i said no

on that day

so i can be free

again

and leap and turn

and be free

never let go

i will be chained to this

and never be free

hearts can be rendered

into hasty, untidy quarters

and takers salvage 

portions from here

and some 

    from

       here

but the soul

must maintain

wholly intact

even when 

spirited away

I'm raising a sail

with skeleton threads,

and you can see through me,

I look like heaven

above a blackened sea

that rolls like glass

as it attempts to escape

from itself,

waves raking the shore

with broken fingers,

trapped by the howling

of wolves,

and men,

and babes,

landlocked souls

with arms reaching

into the water,

no cup to catch a drink,

no sail to borrow wind,

they raise a banner of bones,

and I can see the breeze

watch itself go through

without embrace.

So,

it gives no movement back.